tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post1345669541417923204..comments2024-03-29T02:19:42.154-05:00Comments on Operation Awesome: February 2015 Mystery Editor Critique Forum - OPEN NOW!Dena Pawlinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14444683810125395220noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post-86008720823637456992015-02-07T17:20:52.736-06:002015-02-07T17:20:52.736-06:00I'd like to thank everyone for their time &...I'd like to thank everyone for their time & comments & I know I've been slow in doing so - I've actually moved house so didn't have internet for over a week - plus the moving thing. <br />I'm over the moon that pretty much everyone liked the start and got a sense of the voice. I also appreciate the little things picked up; I can't tell you how many times I have re-read these pages (another reason BETA'S are awesome!) and missed the smallest of things. <br />I have literally Oscar Wilde'ed this MS 30+ times and still missed things! <br /><br />As for the pitch, it's difficult to cast a 25-word pitch with everything you need to say so again your comments are greatly appreciated. My QL goes into more detail as I have 10-times that amount of words but your above comments have helped me improve an new version pitch - although I have to admit it runs over 25-words :)<br />Thanks again to all who have commented & who may yet comment & to the guys running Operation Awesome.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09614043791335176864noreply@blogger.com