tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post5473359550220307431..comments2024-03-28T06:13:46.092-05:00Comments on Operation Awesome: Synopsis Critique #1 - Women's FictionDena Pawlinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14444683810125395220noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post-56475153221230104472017-02-10T12:32:39.955-06:002017-02-10T12:32:39.955-06:00Nice job! I think Jaime's comments are right o...Nice job! I think Jaime's comments are right on about needing to include Liana's feelings about what happens with Danny. I also think the Deb subplot could be cut from the synopsis because it doesn't seem like it propels the plot, except for Liana getting drunk after the funeral. But even then, you could trim it down to, "After the funeral of a close friend, Liana deals with her feelings by getting drunk. etc etc"Kara Reynoldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07147342389371681730noreply@blogger.com