tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post7789729870737057031..comments2024-03-29T02:19:42.154-05:00Comments on Operation Awesome: July Mystery Agent Entry #4: DOGBIRD TO THE RESCUE! Dena Pawlinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14444683810125395220noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post-73781631550745989392014-07-06T10:05:11.396-05:002014-07-06T10:05:11.396-05:00I appreciate the kind comments and helpful feedbac...I appreciate the kind comments and helpful feedback! <br /><br />J. Lenni, I listed the planets by ascending proximity to earth, but did not realize that Mars's position puts it outside of a logical path for Buddy's rocket. It's an easy fix, but important--thank you! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13123778626411194953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post-49086131697485651012014-07-06T09:35:55.776-05:002014-07-06T09:35:55.776-05:00Buddy is such a lovable character. I can picture t...Buddy is such a lovable character. I can picture the illustrations being adorable! This book is unique and different and I think it has great marketability. Best of luck! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post-43835270125361569472014-07-02T20:36:42.216-05:002014-07-02T20:36:42.216-05:00"A bright light streaks across the sky. It pa..."A bright light streaks across the sky. It passes Mercury, Mars, Venus"<br />I'm very confused as to the direction. Mercury, nearest to the sun, and Venus being next, but then passing Mars, which is beyond Earth. Or is there an unusual planetary alignment in the night sky? In which case, why was there no mention of stars or constellations? <br /><br />Good ending though. Sounds like a cute book. J Lenni Dornerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07961335286982498158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6961445666519156260.post-17875780826648601062014-07-02T02:40:34.663-05:002014-07-02T02:40:34.663-05:00I can imagine a cute puppy with floppy ears that t...I can imagine a cute puppy with floppy ears that turn into wings like Dumbo's ears. I'm curious to know is what problem Buddy will encounter if his owners don't need his help.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11270772437218990027noreply@blogger.com