September MA pitch critiques!

Welcome back to the Mystery agent critique portion of our contest. The 16 entries (some didn't turn in their pitches and some opted out of the crtique) will be open for your amazing feedback all week!

Our rules are simple:

• Be helpful. 
• Be relevant.
• Be kind. 

Thank you to all of you, and to all our amazing entrants! Happy critting!

You can also visit the entries in the tab under the OA blog banner:  MA Critiques.

Just a little more info about the forum:

• You DO NOT have to register to comment.

• To comment on a pitch, just click Reply on the main post in the thread. It will bring up a comment box where you can enter your name and comment.

•  To return to the full list,click September 2014 Mystery Agent in the top left corner of the forum.

• And once again, we'd love to know what you think about the new format. Let us know here in the comments. Any feedback would be awesome! Thanks!