The two
most popular points of view for fiction seem to be third person or first
person. And most people I've met have pretty strong opinions about what they
like to read or write. But do you know about all the other POVs out there?
Here are
the main choices:
First person - the
narrator is generally the main character in the book and tells the story in his
or her own point of view, as "I" (I did this, I said, I felt). Here’s
an example:
Last night, I dreamt I went to Manderley
again. It seemed to me I stood by the iron gate leading to the drive, and for a
while I could not enter for the way was barred to me. Then, like all dreamers,
I was possessed of a sudden with supernatural powers and passed like a spirit
through the barrier before me.
~ Rebecca by Daphne Du Maurier
Then we noticed that in the second pillow was
the indentation of a head. One of us lifted something from it, and leaning
forward, that faint and invisible dust dry and acrid in the nostrils, we saw a
long strand of iron-gray hair.
~ A Rose for Emily by William Faulkner
Second
person - very rare - the reader is treated as a character and is
referred to as "you." This type of POV works well for some
non-fiction works. For example, if I was writing a guide book or How-to
article on painting, I could use this to say "First, you gather your supplies. Then you take the paint brush and
apply paint. Then you do this and this and this." For fiction though, this
POV isn't used often and mostly for books like the Choose Your Own
Adventure series or other interactive stories. Here is an example:
What a singular moment is the first one, when
you have hardly begun to recollect yourself after starting from midnight
slumber! By unclosing your eyes so suddenly, you seem to have surprised the
personages of your dream in full convocation round your bed, and catch one
broad glance at them before they can flit into obscurity.
~ “The Haunted Mind” in Twice Told Tales by Nathaniel Hawthorne
Third person limited - the narrator is outside the story but focuses on one
character at a time. (He said, she said). While the POV may change between
different characters, these changes would be separated by scene or chapter
breaks. While in the point of view of a particular character, the
narrator cannot tell the reader what anyone else is thinking, feeling, or
experiencing. The narrator only knows what the point of view character knows. An example:
Just then the stern line came taut under his
foot, where he had kept the loop of the line, and he dropped his oars and felt
the weight of the small tuna’s shivering pull as he held the line firm and
commenced to haul it in. The shivering increased as he pulled in and he could
see the blue back of the fish in the water and the gold of his sides before he
swung him over the side and into the boat.
~ The
Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway
Third person omniscient - the narrator is outside the story but doesn't focus on
one character. The narrator knows all, sees all, conveys all.
This planet has — or rather had — a problem, which
was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of
the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of
these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper,
which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper
that were unhappy…Many were
increasingly of the opinion that they'd all made a big mistake in coming down
from the trees in the first place. And some said that even the trees had been a
bad move, and that no one should ever have left the oceans.
~ Hitchhiker’s
Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams
While some of these POVs seem to be more or less
popular in “mainstream” fiction, all of them can work if executed well. Do you
have a favorite POV you prefer to read or write?
I actually like the omniscient narrator, but it seems almost taboo these days.
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