I know it isn't Tuesday, but hear me out: Tuesday got reserved for our book club post so I took Monday instead.
On that note, if you've read The Martian, by Andy Weir, join us tomorrow for our book club discussion!
Your character has favorite things, just like real people do. You may think it isn't important whether your character prefers chocolate to caramel, or red to blue, but those things inform who we are as people and can add depth to a character. So this Museday, make a list of some of your characters' favorite things, and think of ways to incorporate them into your novel. Bonus points if they actually affect the plot!
And even though it's not Tuesday, I'm still offering a critique to go along with this post. Let me know in the comments if you'd like fresh eyes on your query or Twitter pitch (both #PitMad and #DVPit are coming up!). I'll randomly select people for critiques, so include your Twitter handle or e-mail address so I can contact you if you are selected for a critique!
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Monday, February 29, 2016
Friday, February 26, 2016
How to Book Your Own Blog Tour, Part 5: Wrapping Up the Tour
Previous post - Part 4: Kicking Off the Tour
Today is the final day of my week-long series on how to book your own blog tour. Here's what we're talking about:
- Planning Your Tour
- Recruiting Bloggers
- Keeping Yourself Organized
- Kicking Off the Tour
- Wrapping Up the Tour (This post!)
This is your host, Samantha, and I'm using the following examples as we talk through how to book your own tour:
My July 2015 blog tour ran for two weeks and had eight stops.
My October 14, 2015 cover reveal ran for one day and had fourteen participants.
So far, we've talked about planning your tour, how and where to find potential bloggers, how to keep organized as you recruit, and how to successfully kick off the tour. And now your tour is underway. What do you do?
Share on Social Media
This should go without saying, but I mean, so should the fact that no one wants to listen to the Beatles, but they still play them on Oldies stations. (No? I'm the only one that doesn't like them? OK, fine.)
Share your bloggers' posts throughout the week and beyond. They're sharing their social media sphere of influence, and you're sharing yours. Re-tweet them, say thank you on Twitter (or FaceBook or whatever--sorry, my Twitter bias is showing), and generally give the impression that, golly gee, you're grateful for their time and energy. Which you should be, by the way, but if you're not, that's between you and your deity of choice.
In addition, as I linked to above, make a page on your website that showcases all your posts. People might someday stumble onto your website with a burning curiosity about you and what you have to say, and voila! There's a place where they can read some of the stuff you spent blood, sweat, and tears on!
Don't Forget Your Giveaways
Did you do a giveaway? Don't forget to send off the loot when the window closes. Rafflecopter reminds you and does the pick automatically, so it's super easy.
I also suggest poking holes in the boxes if you want the pet lemurs to survive the trip.
And One Final Request
When your tour draws to a close, I suggest a thank you email to everyone who participated. Yes, in addition to the social media thanks. People like to know they're appreciated. I mean, don't send a crazy, "YOU HAVE MY UNDYING LOVE AND DEVOTION" email every day for the next year, but a final wrap-up won't go amiss.
And now's the time to spring that request I sprung on you at the beginning of my blog series: the newsletter.
I have three newsletters. One for fans, one for bloggers, and one for book reviewers. Since the second and third are many times one and the same type of person, I debated whether or not to merge them into one list. However, I've found that while there is cross-over in the subscribers, it's not 100%. So I keep them separate.
When I send out my tour wrap-up email, I say something like:
Thanks for being a part of my blog tour!
If you enjoyed working with me and want to be notified in the future when I'm booking another tour, cover reveal, or blitz, please sign up for my book blogger list (on the left side of the page). If you're a reviewer and want to be notified of when new ARCs are available, please sign up for my book reviewer list (on the right side of the same page).
And people do it. And they've participate in more than one of my events. It also takes the pressure off the spreadsheet I had you create a couple days ago as being the landing zone for future participants. It takes the awkwardness out of it, too. If they don't want to participate, they can hit the "unsubscribe" button without having to email you and demand to know why you're sending them emails.
(Yes, if you're a blogger or reviewer, you can sign up for my list, even if it's just to spy on me and see how I really do my upcoming blitz.)
Final Wrap-Up
Thank you so much for sticking with me to the end of this series. I certainly hope that you learned something you can apply. If you have questions, post 'em below or find me and the rest of the Operation Awesome gang on Twitter.
If you liked this series and want more tidbits from us on reading and writing, you can sign up to get future blog posts delivered to your inbox. It's in the sidebar over there --->
I hope to see you around again!
Her short fiction ("I Am NOT Little Red Riding Hood") has appeared in the webzine Grievous Angel. Her debut novel, Guarding Angel, received an honorable mention in the 23rd Annual Writer's Digest Self-Published Book Awards: "... A fascinating story of a particularly loving guardian angel. Overall, the writing is emotionally grounded, character-focused, and technically superior..." The sequel, Reaping Angel, is available now.
You can call her Samantha.
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Thursday, February 25, 2016
How to Book Your Own Blog Tour, Part 4: Kicking Off the Tour
Previous post - Part 3: Keeping Yourself Organized
Today is Day 4 of my week-long series on how to book your own blog tour. Our agenda, once again, is:
- Planning Your Tour
- Recruiting Bloggers
- Keeping Yourself Organized
- Kicking Off the Tour (This post!)
- Wrapping Up the Tour
This is Samantha, and I'm going to be using the following examples as we talk through how to book your own tour:
My July 2015 blog tour ran for two weeks and had eight stops.
My October 14, 2015 cover reveal ran for one day and had fourteen participants.
So far, we've talked about planning your tour, how and where to find potential bloggers, and how to keep organized as you recruit. And now the time is approaching for the tour to commence.
Step #1: PANIC!
No, just kidding.
Send Out Your Guest Posts Well in Advance
"Well in advance" means something different to everyone. I can't say that I'm the Patron Saint of Never Sending a Last Minute Blog Post, but my advice is to try sending everything at least a week ahead of when your posts are going live. If you wait too long, people start wondering, "Is she going to send it to me? Is she flaking out? What's going on? Do I need to email her? Did she forget? Did I get the date wrong?" And then they're at the aforementioned Step #1 themselves, and that you don't want.
What's the latest you can go? I would say the Saturday before the blog post is scheduled to go live, and that's pushing it really hard. Give people one weekend day, please. When I get guest posts going live the night before, especially in the middle of the week, I get irritated. I personally do my blog-related activity on my weekends while Morrigan is napping. If you're sending it to me in the middle of the week, I had planned an evening of Netflix and pj's, thanks very much. Now I have to trundle my butt downstairs to my computer and get a post formatted. Even if it takes five minutes, I just don't like doing it. *cries all the tears*
Everyone is different. Maybe one of your bloggers always schedules their posts every Tuesday night. Getting it to them a week ahead of time lets them fit it into their life as they prefer.
Side note: It's perfectly acceptable to email people to tell them you're running behind. Better is giving them the date ("I'll have this to you by Sunday, April 3, in time for you to schedule it for the Tuesday, April 12 book blitz") and then sticking to it. But things happen.
Make It Easy
This little tidbit was pointed out by one of the bloggers that participated in my July 2015 tour, Brian Basham. He said that one of the reasons he enjoyed working with me was because I made it super easy to participate.
In the weeks leading up to the tour, you've been writing and revising your posts. Once that's done, you package everything up to makes it the simplest possible experience for bloggers to get your posts on their blog. You've already created a lovely format and hyperlinked your links. You hit the "send" button, and out goes your posts.
This is what you you want to happen:
- Blogger opens your email.
- Blogger copies your content.
- Blogger pastes your content a new post.
- Blogger schedules your post and presses "publish."
That's it. That is our end goal. That's what's going to win you friends and influence people.
To accomplish this, I write my posts and plan everything in my own blog, and then I copy and paste into two Word documents. The first is the copy/paste from the WYSIWYG editor. The second is the copy/paste from the HTML editor. (Yes, the HTML tab, the one that you're scared to go into on your own blog. It won't bite. I promise.)
I provide both because sometimes the first goes wonky and/or because some people really do like to tweak the HTML themselves (myself included). If you're an HTML tweaker yourself, so much the better, because then you really have ultimate control over what everything looks like. MWAHAHAHA, ULTIMATE CONTROL.
Ahem.
So make everything self-contained. Open -> Copy -> Paste -> Publish.
Ahem.
So make everything self-contained. Open -> Copy -> Paste -> Publish.
Bonus: Make Sharing Easy and Your Posts Pretty
You can add all sorts of bonuses to your email. Pre-written 140-character tweets, several different graphic sizes, whatever else you can think of.
And speaking of graphics, yes. People like looking at aesthetically pleasing things. So use Pixabay. Unsplash, morguefile, or whatever other free graphic sites you like to find images, and then use Canva to create something attractive.
Send those with the post.
Tweet them out on social media.
Admire your awesome blog tour organizational skills.
And speaking of graphics, yes. People like looking at aesthetically pleasing things. So use Pixabay. Unsplash, morguefile, or whatever other free graphic sites you like to find images, and then use Canva to create something attractive.
Send those with the post.
Tweet them out on social media.
Admire your awesome blog tour organizational skills.
Ah, But Don't Forget The Most Important Part
Pop quiz: Why are you scheduling a blog tour?
- Because I love writing blog posts. I can't get enough of writing blog posts. OMG, MOAR BLOG POST WRITING, PLEEZ.
- Because some jerkface told me I had to do a stupid tour if I'm gonna be an author, or some crap like that.
- Because I want to sell books.
The answer is, obviously, d) None of the above; Cthluhu thinks bloggers taste terrible, so I'm hoping to be spared when he rises from the deep.
OK, but on a serious note, take a gander at the end of these posts. You want something like that. A quick little bio and all your links jam-packed in a tiny, little space. Think I went overboard? Fine, then only include your Twitter handle or your webpage or your blog. Whatever. I'm not telling you how to do it. I mean, what do you think this is? A how-to guide or something?
Addendum: Don't Forget To Make Yourself Presentable
This is beyond the scope of this blog series, but I also want to mention one of the most important things about peddling your wares (whether to potential book buyers or potential book blog tour participants): make yourself presentable. Have a professional quality cover image, an author head shot that looks like it was taken by a real photographer and not your cell phone, a book that's been edited, an author webpage that someone with an eye for graphic design helped you create, a purposefully crafted bio that makes you sound like an interesting person, and an awesome book blurb.
Even if you're trade published, you need to put some work into your online persona, so don't think you can scoot around this just because your book package is taken care of by others. You are responsible for presenting you. (Though, of course, your agent & publishing team are there to help.)
If you're not sure how to start polishing your image, spend a lazy Sunday afternoon reading the blog posts over at Rachel Thompson's blog. She knows a thing or two or fourteen about branding.
Got any questions? Post them below, and then come back tomorrow to hear about flawlessly executing and wrapping up your tour!
Next post - Part 5: Wrapping Up the Tour
Next post - Part 5: Wrapping Up the Tour
Her short fiction ("I Am NOT Little Red Riding Hood") has appeared in the webzine Grievous Angel. Her debut novel, Guarding Angel, received an honorable mention in the 23rd Annual Writer's Digest Self-Published Book Awards: "... A fascinating story of a particularly loving guardian angel. Overall, the writing is emotionally grounded, character-focused, and technically superior..." The sequel, Reaping Angel, is available now.
You can call her Samantha.
website | twitter | facebook | pinterest | goodreads
Wednesday, February 24, 2016
How to Book Your Own Blog Tour, Part 3: Keeping Yourself Organized
Previous post - Part 2: Recruiting Bloggers
Today is Day 3 of my week-long series on how to book your own blog tour. Here's what you're going to get out of this week:
- Planning Your Tour
- Recruiting Bloggers
- Keeping Yourself Organized (This post!)
- Kicking Off the Tour
- Wrapping Up the Tour
This is Samantha, and I'll be using the following examples as we talk through how to book your own tour:
My July 2015 blog tour ran for two weeks and had eight stops.
My October 14, 2015 cover reveal ran for one day and had fourteen participants.
So far, we've talked about planning your tour, plus how and where to find potential bloggers. Now that you're all ready to go, it's time to prepare.
I'm an organization freak. I'm a planner, a rearranger, a planner of rearranging. When I was ten years old, I made my bookshelves into a "library," complete with Dewey Decimal System note cards and card holders at the front of all my books. I never got the date stamp I wanted, but that was ok since my brother didn't really give a rip about playing library.
(Now you know what to get me for Christmas next year.)
So let me help you help yourself, by organizing your life... at least in regards to your book tour.
Inviting Bloggers to Your Tour
You've got your pre-written email and the book blogger lists. Now's the time for combing through the lists.
Open up your first potential blog. Now's the time to decide if it's worth emailing your shiny, new introduction email to its owner. Here's the checklist I use to decide.
- Has this person posted in the past month? Sometimes I'll find a blog that looks like a perfect fit, but rats, May 2013 is the last time they posted! Don't spend your precious time on that. You have better things to do.
- Does this person accept my genre? The "About Me" pages are nebulous things. If a blogger doesn't specify what genres they accept, look through some of their posts. You'll see immediately what they like to read. If they aren't interested in your genre, move along.
- Is this person accepting guest bloggers or review requests (if that's something you're looking for)? Again, this may take some sleuthing. Do you see book blitz posts? Are they doing reviews of non-best-sellers?
- Have they provided contact information? This is more annoying to find than you might imagine. Despite the oft-repeated advice, "PUT YOUR CONTACT INFO ON YOUR WEBSITE" (you've done it, right?), people don't.
I'm going to be honest here: You'll feel like you're wasting a lot of time as you sort through blogs, especially if you're as fanatical about me as the details. Like, what are these people thinking? Where is the simple information a poor author like me needs? Don't any of you want books to read or content creators for your blog? COME. ON.
The most frustrating thing is knowing what to do first. If I spend time hunting around for someone's email address, but then I discover they're closed for requests, I've wasted time. If I make sure they're a great fit for my genre and style of book, but then discover their email address is missing, I've wasted time.
But it's still time well spent. I refer you back to the statistics I posted on Monday. If you're emailing a dead blog, it's guaranteed you're not getting a response. Or a no six months after you've released your fifteenth book. Or if, miracle of miracles, they say yes, but then they forget and don't post your guest post or do a review of your book because, after all, they let their blog go dead for a year without bothering to tell anyone about it.
However, don't get discouraged. Their "About Me" page might simply say, "I love books and cats!" and that's all. But they might still end up responding to you. Don't rule people out just because they aren't exactly clear on what they want or how you can get in contact with them. But do rule them out if they say, "Please don't email me about [whatever genre/thing you're peddling]." That's just common sense, right?
Keeping Yourself Organized
And here is where I extol the virtues of spreadsheets.
O spreadsheets, how oft I have praised thy beauty!
Your spreadsheet does not have to be complicated. Your spreadsheet does need to be a way to keep track of stuff. On mine, I have two tabs:
- Bloggers I have emailed
- Bloggers who have responded
And on each tab, I keep basic information about the bloggers, stuff I might need later that I don't want to go hunting for:
- Person's name (if I can find it)
- Email address (and if they have a contact form I used but not email address, I mark "form" here)
- Blog's name
- Link to the blog
- What list I found them on
- When I emailed them
For bloggers who have responded, I keep track of:
- A yes/maybe/no column for each thing -- cover reveal, book review, blog tour, etc.
- Date they responded
And that's it. That's all you really need. If you're contacting 25 blogs a week like I do, it'll fill up fast. You can search and sort and do all sorts of nifty spreadsheet things, but the most important thing--keeping track--is taken care of.
You'll start hearing back, and that's when the magic happens.
Keeping Track of Responses
Short section here because there's really only two things you need to do.
The first is keep your spreadsheet updated, so you have it to refer back to whenever you forget what the heck's going on.
The second is to keep your emails organized. Me? I have a folder for each and every blogger that responds. Then when Invested Ivana of One Book Two (who's awesome, by the way; go check her blog out) emails me, I can go refer to our previous correspondence. No need to sort through my inbox or panic because I can't remember what we talked about. No wondering if I've already offered her my link to my newsletter and worrying if I sound like I'm badgering her.
Organization. It's your friend.
The Work's Not Over
K, so off to the races you go. You're emailing your bloggers, you're starting to hear back, you're filling in spots in your blog tour.
The time is approaching.
Dun dun dun.
Next up: Getting ready for The Big Week.
As always, let me know any burning questions in the comments section!
Next post - Part 4: Kicking Off the Tour
As always, let me know any burning questions in the comments section!
Next post - Part 4: Kicking Off the Tour
Her short fiction ("I Am NOT Little Red Riding Hood") has appeared in the webzine Grievous Angel. Her debut novel, Guarding Angel, received an honorable mention in the 23rd Annual Writer's Digest Self-Published Book Awards: "... A fascinating story of a particularly loving guardian angel. Overall, the writing is emotionally grounded, character-focused, and technically superior..." The sequel, Reaping Angel, is available now.
You can call her Samantha.
website | twitter | facebook | pinterest | goodreads
Tuesday, February 23, 2016
How to Book Your Own Blog Tour, Part 2: Recruiting Bloggers
Previous post - Part 1: Planning Your Tour
Today is Day 2 of my week-long series on how to book your own blog tour. Here's what you're going to get out of this crash course:
- Planning Your Tour
- Recruiting Bloggers (This post!)
- Keeping Yourself Organized
- Kicking Off the Tour
- Wrapping Up the Tour
This is Samantha, and I'm using the following examples as we talk through how to book your own tour:
My July 2015 blog tour ran for two weeks and had eight stops.
My October 14, 2015 cover reveal ran for one day and had fourteen participants.
To add to my copious list of qualifications (as well as, apparently, to further inflate my already bloated ego), I'd like to turn your attention to the fact that for a year, I ran a book review blog accepting self-published novels. (I should probably mention here that many book bloggers do not accept self-published novels for reasons we are all aware of and which are beyond the scope of this particular series.) So when I talk to you like I know what the inside of a book blogger's inbox looks like, well, it's because I do.
Believe me. It's not pretty.
More Planning. Yes, I Said More!
Let's talk for a minute about how busy you are.
You're busy, right?
And what do you hate more than anything in the world?
Overcooked asparagus, spiders that menace you from dark corners when you're stumbling into the bathroom in the middle of the night, and spam.
Spam can come in many forms, and since we're not actually talking about you in this blog series, we're talking about how to recruit bloggers to your book tour, let's get back to talking about bloggers.
Bloggers, bloggers, dear, sweet bloggers, who have opened their inboxes to all manner and sundry of micreants. People sending them requests for reviews even when they don't do reviews. People adding them to email lists unrequested. People demanding things, being rude about things, being downright confusing about things.
Rule #1 of emailing anyone: Don't be that guy.
"So what's your point, Samantha?" you're asking. "I get that I shouldn't be that guy. I won't be that guy. But what does that have to do with planning?"
My point is this. The next thing you need to do before sending out emails to poor, unsuspecting bloggers is to write a short, polite, and to-the-point introductory email.
Using an extremely few number of words, you need to explain these key things in your first email:
- Who you are,
- What you want from them,
- What they're going to get out of participating, and
- What you're offering specifically. Those dates we talked about yesterday? This is where you communicate them.
The third item (what they're going to get out of participating) will be part of what you're conveying with the second and fourth, but you need to keep it in mind. When you get something in your inbox, what do you think? "I certainly hope this is more spam that is asking me to do something that will waste my time"? No, you don't. You think--subconsciously--"What's in this for me?"
In this instance, what you're offering to the bloggers is 1) to bring content to their subscribers that they don't have to expend energy creating themselves and 2) a chance to advertise their blog outside their own sphere of social media influence.
Aha! Yes! That little tidbit we'll bring back in a couple days when we talk about what to do when the tour is going on, but it's super key. If you have an impressive number of **REAL!!** Twitter or blog followers, you can point it out as something they'll get out of it. If not, that's ok. If you're pitching HuffPo, well, good luck, but most bloggers aren't going to care. Most of us are just trying to scrape out a meager little corner of the interwebs, so we're all in the same boat.
An Extremely Few Number of Words
We're all busy. I think I've said that before. I'd check back above, but I don't have time.
Don't ramble on in much the same way this blog post, to an extent, is doing. Don't copy and paste the blurb from all fifteen of your books into the body of the email. Don't make them hunt and search for what you're asking buried in fifteen paragraphs.
I recently received an email from a book-related mailing list that I signed up for at some point. It went on a bit about their organization and then it said, “Would you like to help with an awareness campaign on Amazon?” OK, I have no idea what that means. Not only that, but I don’t care to figure out. I'm busy. I've got things to do: this blog series to write, a book to edit, a critique partner's novel waiting for my feedback, a short story languishing in my head, and another book outline to work on.
Do not be vague.
Instead, tell them exactly what you want in a manner that they can say "yes" or "no" to. Don't be shy. You're going to get a ton of no's by way of non-responders. That's life as a writer. If you don't want to get rejected, you need find a new profession. In fact, telling your "cold calls" exactly what you want is going to work in your favor. You're not their crotchety old aunt Betty who will complain about them at the Thanksgiving dinner table if they don't reply to your email. They have no obligation to wade through your head-scratching prose to get to the point.
Get to your point. Get them to the "yes" or "no." You do that, and you'll see yesses.
An Example: Hello, Good Blogger, My Name Is Samantha
Here's the email that I used to round up participants in my blog tour last spring. This is a format I shamelessly plagiarized borrowed from Kate Tilton, a fabulous author assistant for whom I reviewed books many times during my book blog days:
A note on bulleted lists: Use them to your advantage. They draw the eye. But since you're a writer, you know all about white space and paragraphing, eh? *wink wink*
Oh, and use their name. It will take a bit longer to find it, and in some cases you won't find it, but if you actually send out an email that says, "Dear Blogger," so help me, Flying Spaghetti Monster, I will hunt you down and make you eat your entire spam folder. In the cases where you really can't find it, just leave off the "Dear" part.
I didn't forget the lists I promised yesterday. Lo and behold, here they are! Because I'm a self-published author, they're skewed in that direction. You're welcome.
Glad you asked. Now you start sending out emails and getting ready for the tour. Nothing to it, right?
See ya later, alliga--
Oh, you want some more info? Well, let's get into that tomorrow. You've already got some homework to do. When we reconvene, I'll talk a bit about organizing your campaign and responses.
Questions, comments, concerns? Post 'em below.
Next post - Part 3: Keeping Yourself Organized
Subject: SFF author seeking guest post, interview, or review on your blogI'm not going to go on about all the bits and pieces of this email because you can read it for yourself, but see what I'm saying? Short and to the point. You know what I'm asking. You can say "yes" or "no" to this. There's no hunting or wondering or head scratching.
Dear [Blogger],
I found you on [Name of List]. I’m an SFF author, and I was wondering if you would you be interested in any of the following:
If any of these opportunities sound like something you'd like on your blog, please let me know.
- Author interview or guest post (unique to your blog) during my tour in July
- Cover reveal in the fall of my upcoming release
- Free review copy of my book, Guarding Angel (available now), and, if you enjoy it and want more, the upcoming sequel, Reaping Angel (available early 2016)
About Guarding Angel
Genre: Adult Paranormal (Contains adult content—further details can be provided)
On Amazon – 4.3 stars
On Goodreads – 4.0 stars
[Book blurb]
Thank you for your time,
Samantha Saboviec
A note on bulleted lists: Use them to your advantage. They draw the eye. But since you're a writer, you know all about white space and paragraphing, eh? *wink wink*
Oh, and use their name. It will take a bit longer to find it, and in some cases you won't find it, but if you actually send out an email that says, "Dear Blogger," so help me, Flying Spaghetti Monster, I will hunt you down and make you eat your entire spam folder. In the cases where you really can't find it, just leave off the "Dear" part.
Where Are Those Secret Lists You Promised Me?
I didn't forget the lists I promised yesterday. Lo and behold, here they are! Because I'm a self-published author, they're skewed in that direction. You're welcome.
- Kate Tilton's Book Bloggers
- Book Blogger List
- The Indie View
- Book Blogger Directory -> Lots of dead links, but lots of blogs to explore
- Book Blogger Spreadsheet
- Rachel K. Burke's List of Book Bloggers
- Published To Death's List of Lists
After booking my tours, etc., I've gotten through #1 and started on #2. The further into the archives you go, the more likely you are to find dead links. So it's a short list of lists, but it will take you a long time to get through them.
Please note: If you don't take a long time to get through them, you're not getting a refund on this course. Don't even ask.
Uh. Now What?
Glad you asked. Now you start sending out emails and getting ready for the tour. Nothing to it, right?
See ya later, alliga--
Oh, you want some more info? Well, let's get into that tomorrow. You've already got some homework to do. When we reconvene, I'll talk a bit about organizing your campaign and responses.
Questions, comments, concerns? Post 'em below.
Next post - Part 3: Keeping Yourself Organized
Her short fiction ("I Am NOT Little Red Riding Hood") has appeared in the webzine Grievous Angel. Her debut novel, Guarding Angel, received an honorable mention in the 23rd Annual Writer's Digest Self-Published Book Awards: "... A fascinating story of a particularly loving guardian angel. Overall, the writing is emotionally grounded, character-focused, and technically superior..." The sequel, Reaping Angel, is available now.
You can call her Samantha.
website | twitter | facebook | pinterest | goodreads
Monday, February 22, 2016
How to Book Your Own Blog Tour, Part 1: Planning Your Tour
Hello, everyone, and welcome to this week-long series on how to book your own blog tour. On the agenda for the week is:
- Planning Your Tour (This post!)
- Recruiting Bloggers
- Keeping Yourself Organized
- Kicking Off the Tour
- Wrapping Up the Tour
Introduction
This is Samantha, and I'm an SFF author with one book out and another on the way. Since I released my first book, I've done three blog tours, two cover reveals, and one release day blitz. (I'm also planning another blitz for April 12, 2016, and if you have a blog and want to be part of it, you can sign up here [left side]. Yes, that was a shameless plug, but I'm also going to talk more about my mailing lists on Day 5, so it's relevant. Kind of. Don't hate me?)
When I published my first book, I scheduled the cover reveal and my first blog tour through a company. However, I've a bit of a control freak--and I'm working with a limited marketing budget--so for the rest, I've scheduled my own.
Be warned: It's a lot of work.
However, there are many good reasons to DIY, and if you stay organized, it will run smoothly.
Usually I don't talk about my non-writing credentials, but since it's relevant for this series of posts, here we go. In my day job, I'm a senior project manager. I've worked in banking IT for twelve years, and I regularly run multi-million dollar projects. Whether you're putting together a book, a blog tour, or a system replacement project, the same principles apply:
- Create your plan ahead of time.
- Keep track of the details. (I prefer spreadsheets, but you can do it however you like.)
- Be prepared for unforeseen circumstances, both by keeping a flexible mindset and by creating contingency plans in advance.
- Have fun. If you're not having fun, why are you doing this?
So let's talk about your plan.
Planning
The things you need to decide are 1) when you want the tour to run, 2) what you want to contribute to the blogs, 3) whether you want to do a giveraway, and 4) how many stops you want to make.
I'll talk about two examples:
My July 2015 blog tour ran for two weeks and had eight stops.
My October 14, 2015 cover reveal ran for one day and had fourteen participants.
In the case of a tour, you'll schedule multiple dates and (probably) fewer blogs. In the case of a cover reveal or a release date blitz, you'll schedule one date and (probably) more blogs.
When Do You Want the Tour to Run?
The "when" is pretty straight-forward. In the case of my July blog tour, I picked a two week period, and when I invited bloggers, I let them choose their dates within that range. As you can see from my tour page, not all the dates were filled, but that was OK with me. I was also doing a 99 cent promotion, which I advertised on Book Gorilla (ok results), eReader News Today (pretty good results), and some others that didn't net to anything (so I won't link them).
Make sure you plan your tour well in advance. It will take a while to send out requests to book bloggers--unfortunately, there's no "mail merge and send" option. Because you want this to be successful, you're going to pick through blog lists and individually email bloggers.
July Tour Stats:
- Emails sent out = 53
- No response = 39 (74%)
- Negative responses = 3 (6%)
- Positive responses = 11 (20%)
- Actual stops = 8 (With 3 being people I connected with previously)
October Cover Reveal Stats:
- Emails sent out = 78
- No response = 48 (61%)
- Negative responses = 7 (9%)
- Bounced email addresses = 2 (3%)
- Positive responses = 21 (27%)
- Actual participants = 14 (With several being people I talked to during the July tour campaign)
What Do You Want to Contribute to the Blogs?
In the case of a release day blitz or cover reveal, what you provide is easy and far less work because you're only creating one post for everyone.
However, in the case of a tour, you have to decide: Are you going to do a guest post? Excerpts from your book? Deleted scenes? Something themed? Any old random thing? Decide ahead of time so you can communicate that to the bloggers you're inviting. And I highly recommend a unique post per blog, which means you can cross-promote effectively. If it's the same post everywhere, people aren't going to go to other blogs, which works for a release blitz but not a tour.
For my stops, I did a combination of guest posts and deleted scenes. Some of the bloggers had specific ideas of what they wanted. For instance, Amaryllis at The Opinionated Woman wanted me to review something, and I picked a book I'd just read, Starship Troopers. Others, such as our very own Operation Awesome, of which I wasn't a member yet, wanted something in a theme--in that case, writing-related--so I wrote about a technique I use to flesh out characters. Others were open to anything, so I gave them deleted scenes.
Do You Want to Do a Giveaway?
Giveaways can be whatever you want--books, amazon gift cards, swag, pet lemurs--but don't forget that you have to get everyone their prizes after the tour. If you're giving away Physical Stuff In The Real World, you need to decide if it's open internationally or not. (Postage isn't free!)
You also need to decide how much stuff you're giving away. If you're doing a giveaway per blog, that's great! People love to enter giveaways! They'll hop around to all your stops! However, that means you have to do more organization both before and after.
I didn't do giveaways as part of either example I'm using, but I have in the past, and I recommend Rafflecopter. It's free and easy, although you still have to package up and send out the pet lemurs yourself.
How Many Stops Do You Want to Make?
This isn't quite as straight-forward as it might sound, and it's closely tied to the previous decisions. The more you plan to the do, the more work it's going to be. I mean, duh, obviously, but you really have to think about this.
If you're doing a unique post per stop, that's great! Bloggers love unique content! You'll probably entice more to participate! However, that means you have to write as many unique posts as there are unique stops. If you give yourself plenty of time, you can crank out 20 blog posts in the weeks leading up to the tour. Just be sure that you're prepared to do that much writing and editing and emailing.
My biggest problem? Coming up with interesting ideas. There's a reason I'm on a shared blog where I do more regular things like the flash fiction contest than blogging. But if you're someone who can crank out ideas, you'll have no problem with multiple tour stops.
Conclusion
Hopefully I've impressed upon you the importance of planning this in advance. Things will always arise that you haven't thought of, but make sure you've decided how you want everything to go. In the words of Yogi Berra, "If you don't know where you're going, you'll end up some place else."
Tomorrow we'll talk about the actual recruitment process. I have some secret lists of book bloggers that I'll share from my secret repository of secret things.
Just kidding, they're not actually secret.
Or are they?
If you have questions for me, I'm happy to answer in the comments section.
Next post - Part 2: Recruiting Bloggers
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Sunday, February 21, 2016
Flash Fiction Contest #10 Winner
Good evening, all! Here ends another edition of the #OAFlash Fiction contest.
Flash Fiction Contest #10 Prompt: Spaghetti
Flash Fiction Contest #10 Prompt: Spaghetti
Entry by Julia
Long ago when the world was still new, the people of earth revered the Sun, for it chased away darkness and with it the creatures that lurked therein. It was a time before monsters were banished, and held captive in the minds of children. Warriors were trained up, and they prayed to the God’s of their world to free them from the terrible creatures that tormented them in the night.
Many had failed to defeat the witch. The cave was her home, and her children were the snakes that adorned her head in place of hair. The last warrior was sent into battle against her. He was everything a warrior should be, strong, brave, and true. He marched into battle not wielding a sword, but alone with only his mind to save him. For the mind is the greatest weapon anyone can posses.
Entering the cave he peered over his shoulder and slunk into the shadows, whimpering, for while he acted the part of a brave warrior he was truly as scared as the rest.
He prepared his mind picturing his foe, Not snakes…. he imagined. “Please! Not snakes!”
Deep in the cave there arose a scream, and he knew he had won. He raced towards the sound, and upon seeing her he fell to his knees laughing, a deep belly laugh. The snakes were gone replaced by… spaghetti! The witch, no longer frightening or scary had no place in the shadows or darkness, and was banished from the land.
Many had failed to defeat the witch. The cave was her home, and her children were the snakes that adorned her head in place of hair. The last warrior was sent into battle against her. He was everything a warrior should be, strong, brave, and true. He marched into battle not wielding a sword, but alone with only his mind to save him. For the mind is the greatest weapon anyone can posses.
Entering the cave he peered over his shoulder and slunk into the shadows, whimpering, for while he acted the part of a brave warrior he was truly as scared as the rest.
He prepared his mind picturing his foe, Not snakes…. he imagined. “Please! Not snakes!”
Deep in the cave there arose a scream, and he knew he had won. He raced towards the sound, and upon seeing her he fell to his knees laughing, a deep belly laugh. The snakes were gone replaced by… spaghetti! The witch, no longer frightening or scary had no place in the shadows or darkness, and was banished from the land.
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Thanks for stopping by. Tomorrow, I (Samantha) will be kicking off a series on how to book your own blog tour. See you then!
Friday, February 19, 2016
Flash Fiction Contest #10 & Refractions Vol 3 Giveaway!
"On top of spagheeeeetiiiii / All covered with cheeeeeeeese / I lost my poor meeeeeatbaaaalll / When somebody sneeeeeezed."
Hi there.
Welcome to the #OAFlash fiction contest for this weekend. Need a rules refresher? Go here.
Would you like to take a guess what the prompt is? No? OK, then, I'll just tell you.
Flash Fiction Prompt for Friday, February 19, 2016
And new this week: A tweetable! Invite your friends and followers! Tell everyone about #OAFlash!
Go forth and create me something wonderful!
Win a copy of Refractions Vol 3!
And today, to celebrate short fiction, we're giving away one ebook copy of Refractions Vol 3, a bi-annual journal of short stories for young adult readers! Take part in the "Kuiper Belt Derby" or meet a Spirit King under an African sky. Includes work by Operation Awesome contributor Wendy Nikel, Anne E Johnson, and Danielle Donaldson.
Published: Feb 1, 2016 by Golden Fleece Press
48 pages
Hi there.
Welcome to the #OAFlash fiction contest for this weekend. Need a rules refresher? Go here.
Would you like to take a guess what the prompt is? No? OK, then, I'll just tell you.
Flash Fiction Prompt for Friday, February 19, 2016
And new this week: A tweetable! Invite your friends and followers! Tell everyone about #OAFlash!
Click to Tweet: Go enter the #OAFlash fiction contest this week @OpAwesome6: http://ctt.ec/q106b+
Go forth and create me something wonderful!
Win a copy of Refractions Vol 3!
And today, to celebrate short fiction, we're giving away one ebook copy of Refractions Vol 3, a bi-annual journal of short stories for young adult readers! Take part in the "Kuiper Belt Derby" or meet a Spirit King under an African sky. Includes work by Operation Awesome contributor Wendy Nikel, Anne E Johnson, and Danielle Donaldson.
Published: Feb 1, 2016 by Golden Fleece Press
48 pages
Thursday, February 18, 2016
Solving Story Flow Issues
My first novel had flow issues. Other novels I was reading at the time seemed to flow so easily from one idea to the next–like a slinky walking down the stairs, but mine was more like a dollar store slinky–it would make it to the second step and just roll the rest of the way down. I wanted that smooth flow for my book, but couldn’t put my finger on the problem or decipher what made those other books work.
A couple years ago, I took Advanced Fiction Writing with Steve Alcorn--which I highly recommend--and in one of the lessons he presented the Scene and Sequel technique. I doubted him. In fact, I told him how wrong he was and set out to prove it. But, I soon realized, much to my irritation, he was right. Scene and Sequel not only remedied my story flow issues, but has been the technique that has most transformed my manuscripts.
If I were naming this technique I would have called it "Action and Reaction." It’s a way of keeping tension and action at a high level, while giving your character a chance to react to what’s going on. In every book there are hundreds of scene and sequel pairs and may be multiple pairs within each chapter.
An individual scene or sequel can be long or short depending on your genre and target audience. It can even be applied in dialogue.
Here’s how it works:
Scene:
Sequel:
- Goal– What the character hopes to accomplish, big or small.
- Conflict– A point of tension in reaching the goal or conflict with the goal itself.
- Disaster– A setback, big or small, that increases tension. Can even be a reverse disaster, a too good to be true moment.
Sequel:
- Emotion– Reveal how the character feels (remember to show not tell)
- Thought- What’s your character thinking at that moment?
- Decision– How will they handle the conflict? Remember that making no decision is still a decision
- Action– What course of action will they take as a result?
Here’s a simple example:
Laura snatched her keys off the kitchen counter and ran for the front door. (Goal) A brisk arctic wind smacked her in the face when she stepped outside. She trudged through knee deep snow to her car, her nose already stinging from the cold. (Conflict) Out of the wind and tucked inside her car, she slid the key into the ignition and gave it a crank. Click. She turned the key again, pumped the gas. Nothing but clicks of automotive death and dim dashboard lights. (Disaster)
Laura pounded her fists on her steering wheel. (Emotion) Not today! She’d been waiting months for this interview. (Thought) She dropped her forehead against the steering wheel. She couldn’t give up, couldn’t let this beat her. (Decision) She grabbed her purse and ran for bus stop. (Action)
Take a piece of your own writing and give it a try. With repeated use, it becomes second nature--the logical way to organize a novel. Check out Crossing the Threshold for a deeper discussion of Scene and Sequel.
Melinda Friesen writes novels for teens and short stories. You can find her first published novel, Enslavement, here. Unfortunately, she is all too familiar with automotive clicks of death.
Laura snatched her keys off the kitchen counter and ran for the front door. (Goal) A brisk arctic wind smacked her in the face when she stepped outside. She trudged through knee deep snow to her car, her nose already stinging from the cold. (Conflict) Out of the wind and tucked inside her car, she slid the key into the ignition and gave it a crank. Click. She turned the key again, pumped the gas. Nothing but clicks of automotive death and dim dashboard lights. (Disaster)
Laura pounded her fists on her steering wheel. (Emotion) Not today! She’d been waiting months for this interview. (Thought) She dropped her forehead against the steering wheel. She couldn’t give up, couldn’t let this beat her. (Decision) She grabbed her purse and ran for bus stop. (Action)
Take a piece of your own writing and give it a try. With repeated use, it becomes second nature--the logical way to organize a novel. Check out Crossing the Threshold for a deeper discussion of Scene and Sequel.
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Melinda Friesen writes novels for teens and short stories. You can find her first published novel, Enslavement, here. Unfortunately, she is all too familiar with automotive clicks of death.
Tuesday, February 16, 2016
A letter to my 11-year-old friend who wants to be a writer
Dear friend,
I love that you love to read so much, and that you want to tell your own stories, too. Storytelling is an ancient pastime, a magical process, and a breathless escape from reality.
Start writing now. Don't think you have to wait until school's out, or you have your own computer, or you're an adult. You have stories worth sharing now, even as young as you are. It takes dedication and lots of hard work to write out an entire story, from start to finish. Many start; few finish. Practice being a finisher, right now.
Let other people read your stories, if you want. Share them with people that will love them. Ask each of those people for one idea of what you could do better. Get used to listening to other people's ideas, and deciding for yourself if you want to use them next time.
Keep reading books. Nothing helps you understand how to write better than absorbing the writings of those who have mastered the nitty-gritty of how sentences work. Pay attention as you read. At the end of a book, determine why you liked it so much (or didn't like it!). Those are valuable lessons you can apply to your own writing.
And finally, learn to shut out those voices (both yours and other people's) that tell you that you can't write a book. Surround yourself with people who will encourage and help you. Because you can write a book. Somewhere, floating in that head of yours, is a book only you can write. I hope you will.
Your friend,
Kara
I love that you love to read so much, and that you want to tell your own stories, too. Storytelling is an ancient pastime, a magical process, and a breathless escape from reality.
Start writing now. Don't think you have to wait until school's out, or you have your own computer, or you're an adult. You have stories worth sharing now, even as young as you are. It takes dedication and lots of hard work to write out an entire story, from start to finish. Many start; few finish. Practice being a finisher, right now.
Let other people read your stories, if you want. Share them with people that will love them. Ask each of those people for one idea of what you could do better. Get used to listening to other people's ideas, and deciding for yourself if you want to use them next time.
Keep reading books. Nothing helps you understand how to write better than absorbing the writings of those who have mastered the nitty-gritty of how sentences work. Pay attention as you read. At the end of a book, determine why you liked it so much (or didn't like it!). Those are valuable lessons you can apply to your own writing.
And finally, learn to shut out those voices (both yours and other people's) that tell you that you can't write a book. Surround yourself with people who will encourage and help you. Because you can write a book. Somewhere, floating in that head of yours, is a book only you can write. I hope you will.
Your friend,
Kara
Monday, February 15, 2016
March 2016 Pass or Pages Details
Operation Awesome is excited about the next round of #PassOrPages, coming in March!
And what, you might be asking, is #PassOrPages? It's a query contest we hold every other month, for a specific age category and genre that we change each time. A handful of agents provide feedback on the selected anonymous queries and first 250 pages. Our minimum requirement from the agents is to tell us where they stopped reading and why, although in our last contest, the agents went above and beyond and provided more feedback. (And a big thank you is in order for that! We all know how busy agents are.)
The January edition was a success, with four agents participating to give feedback on five randomly chosen entries in the adult mystery genre. You can look at what they had to say starting here, and you can read a little bit more about the contest and rules here.
The details for the upcoming round are as follows:
Starts: Monday, March 14, 2016, at 6 a.m. Eastern
Ends: Wednesday, March 16, 2016 at 6 p.m. Eastern
Category/Genre: YA Contemporary
How To Enter: Fill out the entry form on the contest post when it goes live
What Is Required: Your query (no bio or customization), your first 250 words, a complete and polished MS
We are not putting a limit on the entries accepted. As with last time, we'll be randomly selecting 5 entries to forward on to all the participating agents for feedback. We will not proofread them or change them in any way (except to remove bio information, if you forgot to do so before entering).
WE HIGHLY SUGGEST THAT YOU POLISH YOUR QUERY AHEAD OF TIME. Please no first drafts. The agents are expecting query-ready queries. But keep in mind that this contest is for people looking for feedback on their query letter and first page. It would be ideal for someone who has already workshopped their query and is about to start the query process or who has already begun but isn't getting requests for more pages.
Also, your manuscript should be polished and query-ready, too. Agents do have the option of requesting more--up to the full--so be prepared to send it.
We'll be doing the announcement as to which agents will be participating on March 7. See you then!
Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Wednesday Debut Interview - Beautiful Broken Things by Sara Barnard
Our first Wednesday Debut Interview of 2016 is Sara Barnard, here to talk with us about her debut YA novel, BEAUTIFUL BROKEN THINGS!
Welcome! First off, tell us a bit about yourself!
I live on the south coast of the UK, just outside Brighton - where I lived for five years - in a small town with my boyfriend and my tuxedo cat. When I'm not writing books I'm a freelance content professional, which means I help companies with their online materials and websites. I'm a big reader, strident feminist and somewhat-lapsed Quaker.
How would you describe BEAUTIFUL BROKEN THINGS?
Beautiful Broken Things is a platonic love story about best friends. It follows three girls - Caddy, Rosie and Suzanne - as they learn about the world and each other. Along the way there's tears and giggles, beaches and Nandos, trauma and survival. And a lot of hugging.
Let's talk a bit about your writing process. How long has it been from the time that you began the first draft of this book until the date of its publication?
A long time! I wrote the very first version of this book when I was 13, which was 15 years ago now. It's obviously gone through a lot of incarnations since then - and so have I! I'm glad now that it took its time coming; it was worth the wait!
What scene, character, or aspect of this book did you most enjoy writing?
I always loved writing the scenes between the three girls when they're just being together. I honestly could have written entire novels based around just this, but I don't think that would have been as interesting to everyone else! The conversations were the easiest for me and when I was at my most relaxed as a writer. The best ones always felt like I was listening to a conversation instead of writing it myself - like they were there in the room with me.
Welcome! First off, tell us a bit about yourself!
I live on the south coast of the UK, just outside Brighton - where I lived for five years - in a small town with my boyfriend and my tuxedo cat. When I'm not writing books I'm a freelance content professional, which means I help companies with their online materials and websites. I'm a big reader, strident feminist and somewhat-lapsed Quaker.
How would you describe BEAUTIFUL BROKEN THINGS?
Beautiful Broken Things is a platonic love story about best friends. It follows three girls - Caddy, Rosie and Suzanne - as they learn about the world and each other. Along the way there's tears and giggles, beaches and Nandos, trauma and survival. And a lot of hugging.
Let's talk a bit about your writing process. How long has it been from the time that you began the first draft of this book until the date of its publication?
A long time! I wrote the very first version of this book when I was 13, which was 15 years ago now. It's obviously gone through a lot of incarnations since then - and so have I! I'm glad now that it took its time coming; it was worth the wait!
What scene, character, or aspect of this book did you most enjoy writing?
I always loved writing the scenes between the three girls when they're just being together. I honestly could have written entire novels based around just this, but I don't think that would have been as interesting to everyone else! The conversations were the easiest for me and when I was at my most relaxed as a writer. The best ones always felt like I was listening to a conversation instead of writing it myself - like they were there in the room with me.
BEAUTIFUL BROKEN THINGS deals with, among other things, mental illness. What research did you do to portray this in an accurate, realistic, and respectful way?
As with most things I write, I started with the characters. With Suzanne, understanding where she was coming from and how she'd react to things was central to the struggles she was facing with her mental health. If I'd started with research on depression or suicidal ideation, it wouldn't have been *her* in the way it needed to be. I needed to know her first and then do more specific research - and by that stage it was all coming very naturally.
It was slightly more complicated with a character like Tarin (Caddy's older sister), because I knew less about bipolar disorder, but again I researched everything from the perspective of her character. It's always character first and though that is of course influenced by things like mental health, it was important to me to show that it's not everything. Having bipolar disorder is the least interesting thing about Tarin - I hope!
On the topic of your publication journey: every writer experiences some rejection and setbacks along the way. How did you learn to cope with them and move on?
Unfortunately there's not a magic phrase or piece of advice that will make rejection hurt less - it's just something you have to go through as a writer. I remember when I got my first "real" rejection through (from a literary agency) I felt like I was earning my chops as a professional, because being rejected is what happens to professionals! It helped a *tiny bit* to think of it that way!
How did you find your publisher? What makes them a good fit for you and your book?
My brilliant agent - Claire Wilson - did all the hard work for me. She submitted the finished book to a number of editors at different publishing houses and then it was a case of seeing who was interested and what the offers were. The first publisher I met was Macmillan, and I knew immediately that was where I wanted to be. Their enthusiasm for the book was so clear and they're such a brilliant publisher. It was a no-brainer. The team who work with me and BBT at Macmillan Children's are so talented and passionate. I couldn't be happier.
Tell us about your book cover! Who designed it? How much say did you have in it? What do you want it to tell your readers about your story?
Rachel Vale at Macmillan designed it! It is obviously the most beautiful thing I've ever seen. I was lucky in that I had some say in the cover design, but luckily I didn't need to get involved much because Rachel did such a brilliant job. We went through just one different design before this final one came through.
Above all, I wanted the cover to tell readers that this is a story worth reading, without giving the wrong impression of what they'd find inside and without giving too much away. I think it does it perfectly.
Tell us about your title. Was this the original title you'd had in mind? If not, what made you change it?
Beautiful Broken Things went through a *lot* of titles! It actually had a different title at every stage of the process! While I was writing it, I was calling it Third Wheels, but it was also known as Cracked and Thanks To You at various stages! My publisher felt the book needed a stronger title, and I'm VERY happy with the title it ended up with.
Can you tell us about some of the things you been working on between signing a contract for BEAUTIFUL BROKEN THINGS and its release?
I spent some time working with my editor to polish up Beautiful Broken Things, but I've also been working on my next book, which is another contemporary standalone about love, communication and anxiety.
How does it feel to finally have your book out in the hands of readers? Do you have any events planned you want people to know about?
It feels amazing! (And a bit scary!) I'm going to be doing several events that I'm excited about, such as the World Book Day Teen Fest event in March with Holly Bourne and Juno Dawson.
Is there any other advice you'd like to pass on to others pursuing publication? Anything you would have done differently?
KEEP GOING. There is honestly no better advice I can give than that. Maybe I could have done some things differently, but I'm glad I didn't. I've ended up with the best agent, editor and book I could ever have hoped for. It was worth it!
And, just for fun, which book in your own library do you think would be your main character Caddy's favorite?
I feel like Caddy would be a big John Green fan, to be honest! I can imagine her shedding some tears over The Fault in our Stars.
Thank you so much for your participation in this Wednesday Debut Interview! And congrats on your new book!
As with most things I write, I started with the characters. With Suzanne, understanding where she was coming from and how she'd react to things was central to the struggles she was facing with her mental health. If I'd started with research on depression or suicidal ideation, it wouldn't have been *her* in the way it needed to be. I needed to know her first and then do more specific research - and by that stage it was all coming very naturally.
It was slightly more complicated with a character like Tarin (Caddy's older sister), because I knew less about bipolar disorder, but again I researched everything from the perspective of her character. It's always character first and though that is of course influenced by things like mental health, it was important to me to show that it's not everything. Having bipolar disorder is the least interesting thing about Tarin - I hope!
On the topic of your publication journey: every writer experiences some rejection and setbacks along the way. How did you learn to cope with them and move on?
Unfortunately there's not a magic phrase or piece of advice that will make rejection hurt less - it's just something you have to go through as a writer. I remember when I got my first "real" rejection through (from a literary agency) I felt like I was earning my chops as a professional, because being rejected is what happens to professionals! It helped a *tiny bit* to think of it that way!
How did you find your publisher? What makes them a good fit for you and your book?
My brilliant agent - Claire Wilson - did all the hard work for me. She submitted the finished book to a number of editors at different publishing houses and then it was a case of seeing who was interested and what the offers were. The first publisher I met was Macmillan, and I knew immediately that was where I wanted to be. Their enthusiasm for the book was so clear and they're such a brilliant publisher. It was a no-brainer. The team who work with me and BBT at Macmillan Children's are so talented and passionate. I couldn't be happier.
Tell us about your book cover! Who designed it? How much say did you have in it? What do you want it to tell your readers about your story?
Rachel Vale at Macmillan designed it! It is obviously the most beautiful thing I've ever seen. I was lucky in that I had some say in the cover design, but luckily I didn't need to get involved much because Rachel did such a brilliant job. We went through just one different design before this final one came through.
Above all, I wanted the cover to tell readers that this is a story worth reading, without giving the wrong impression of what they'd find inside and without giving too much away. I think it does it perfectly.
Tell us about your title. Was this the original title you'd had in mind? If not, what made you change it?
Beautiful Broken Things went through a *lot* of titles! It actually had a different title at every stage of the process! While I was writing it, I was calling it Third Wheels, but it was also known as Cracked and Thanks To You at various stages! My publisher felt the book needed a stronger title, and I'm VERY happy with the title it ended up with.
Can you tell us about some of the things you been working on between signing a contract for BEAUTIFUL BROKEN THINGS and its release?
I spent some time working with my editor to polish up Beautiful Broken Things, but I've also been working on my next book, which is another contemporary standalone about love, communication and anxiety.
How does it feel to finally have your book out in the hands of readers? Do you have any events planned you want people to know about?
It feels amazing! (And a bit scary!) I'm going to be doing several events that I'm excited about, such as the World Book Day Teen Fest event in March with Holly Bourne and Juno Dawson.
Is there any other advice you'd like to pass on to others pursuing publication? Anything you would have done differently?
KEEP GOING. There is honestly no better advice I can give than that. Maybe I could have done some things differently, but I'm glad I didn't. I've ended up with the best agent, editor and book I could ever have hoped for. It was worth it!
And, just for fun, which book in your own library do you think would be your main character Caddy's favorite?
I feel like Caddy would be a big John Green fan, to be honest! I can imagine her shedding some tears over The Fault in our Stars.
Thank you so much for your participation in this Wednesday Debut Interview! And congrats on your new book!
Purchase BEAUTIFUL BROKEN THINGS here!
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Do you or someone you know have a debut book coming out this year? If you'd like to be featured in a Wednesday Debut Interview, please email wendynikel at gmail dot com with your book's title, release date, publisher, and category/genre.
Tuesday, February 9, 2016
Tuesday Museday is back!
I missed doing Tuesday Museday--I can't believe that this is the first one of 2016 and it's February! So, for your inspiration today... (drumroll, please)
Write a scene in which your character does something that makes another character very nervous.
Need fresh eyes on your query letter or Twitter pitch? I'm offering up a critique this week. Speak up in the comments (include your twitter handle or e-mail) and I'll select someone at random for a critique!
Monday, February 8, 2016
Guest Post: Taryn Skipper: Using Text-To-Speech Programs to Develop Characters
Using Text-To-Speech
programs to Develop Characters
I tend to talk to myself. Some people like to call it “thinking
out loud” but I won’t deny it; myself and I have some great conversations, and
sometimes I’m a really great sounding board. But not always. Sometimes I just
wish I had someone else who was just as passionate about and interested in my
developing manuscript as I am, and could answer me every time I asked something
like, “Okay, how does this sound,” or “Does that really sound like something this
character would say?” And sometimes I just need other-me to forget they’ve written anything, and read it with fresh eyes. I’m not ready for beta readers,
but I need some new insight. How can I cleanse my palate a little bit and get a
new perspective on my characters, or on my work as a whole?
Try online Text-To-Speech (TTS) readers. It’s a tactic I’ve
found enlightening, not to mention pretty entertaining. My main character is male, so I worry
sometimes about whether or not he sounds masculine enough. Running his lines through TTS
programs have helped me realize which lines really work and which need
tweaking. When I can hear him
speak his lines, I get a better feel for his personality, and how he might
actually phrase his thoughts.
Here are few helpful TTS
exercises you might try:
-Run whatever chapter you’re working on in a UK accent (or an
American accent if you’re from the UK). Hearing it so differently from what I
hear in my head really puts a new spin on the words and helps me pick up on
little things, working and non, that I normally skip over. Plus it just sounds
so fancy.
-Try lines for each character in different voices until you
find one that is closest to how you think they probably sound. You may be
surprised, and learn something something new about their personality.
-Create audio files for each line in a dialogue in each
character’s voice, and play them back in order. You will actually hear your
characters converse, which is amazing, but you’ll also be able to gauge whether
each character is speaking as he or she would.
-If you’re a woman, have a man read your book out loud, and
vice versa. It might help broaden your perspective to hear how it sounds to
someone who isn’t you.
-Instead of reading a couple paragraphs back before you pick up
writing or rewriting for the day, try playing those paragraphs out loud. You never know what ideas might flare
up.
Although TTS programs have come a long way since the MagicSpell
wizard used to read your ICQ messages to you, keep in mind that a computer
still doesn’t sound like a fully-produced audiobook. It will still sound
somewhat robotic, with incorrect cadance and strange emphases. Do your best to
listen past the weirdness!
Below are a few free online TTS readers to try out:
http://ttsreader.com/ No character limit, US English is
female, and UK English is Male. I like the UK English, and I like this reader
because it’s quick and responsive.
http://www.fromtexttospeech.com/ This is one
where you have the option to download seperate files for each line. Also no character limit, and several
different voices, including an Indian accent.
https://acapela-box.com/AcaBox/index.php This
has the most choices and it’s wonderful for hearing lines from diverse
characters! In US English you can hear children’s voices, a teenager (Scott),
an old man, a Texan guy (Michah), a child with an Hispanic accent (Emilio), a
child who sounds like she’s from France or something (Valeria), a sad guy, a
super happy guy, and yes, even a Yoda voice, with which I may or may not have
spent my evening playing. Warn you I must: get distracted, you will. There are also several other choices
under British, Scottish, Australian, and Indian English. If your character is from another
country, select any language (Russian, Dutch, German, Japanese, etc etc) and the
voice will read your English text with a thick accent. You can’t download for free from here,
but you can listen online.
Do you have any readers you love, or any other methods for
seeing your work with fresh eyes? I’d love to hear them!
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The Bear, The Box and the Boy (also available in bilingual English/Spanish, Russian, or Chinese) http://amzn.com/1502493136 The Girl Who Knew She Was a Princess http://amzn.com/1503321916
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