Write a scene in which your character does something that makes another character very nervous.
Need fresh eyes on your query letter or Twitter pitch? I'm offering up a critique this week. Speak up in the comments (include your twitter handle or e-mail) and I'll select someone at random for a critique!
10 comments:
I'd love fresh eyes on my query letter. Thanks :)
Twitter handle @SujaSukumar
I'd love some eyes on mine as well.
Twitter: @KARiley40
Interesting challenge! More so because the MC doesn't like making people nervous, but I know exactly who would get nervous around him. Now I must write!
I'd love a query letter critique!
My Twitter handle is @elisasjacobs
I love this idea for a scene. I've been in a rut lately with my WIP, and I think I'm going to try this!
I would love a query letter or twitter pitch critique!
twitter: @ilovebooks257
Thank you! :)
Hi,
My query could really use a fresh pair of eyes. I've been through so many revisions, and used so many versions, I can't really tell anymore what works and what needs to be cut out. Or worst, I might need to start from scratch. Cold shivers.
My e-mail is: denisa.melinte@ymail.com
Thank you!
Oohhh,ooohhhh, my pitch needs some help!!
@joedirt16
Oohhh,ooohhhh, my pitch needs some help!!
@joedirt16
Thanks for doing this! @rsjoneseeauthor
Okay, that's the cutoff!
Hi Denisa,
Feel free to send me your query! operationawesome6 at gmail. Include my name in the subject line. Thanks!
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