Friday, March 19, 2021

March 2021 Pass or Pages Entry #5

It's time for the Pass or Pages feedback reveal!  We're so thankful for our awesome agents Silvia Monteni, Jess Dallow, and Lucy Irvine for taking the time to critique these entries.  And a shout out to the brave authors whose work will be on the blog this week.  You are awesome!

Entry 5: The Warrior Within


Query:


My f/f paranormal romance The Warrior Within is 113k words and is comparable to a cross between Charlaine Harris’ Southern Vampire series and Alexandra Ivy’s Guardians of Eternity.

Libby struggles with a debilitating disease[JD1] and is resigned to singlehood. When she goes out one evening with co-workers, the last thing she expects is to stumble into the woman of her dreams. As she falls in love with Jo, a 150-year-old half-vampire from France’s Ancien Regime, Libby comes to recognize her inner worth.

But Jo has powerful enemies, including her vampire father. Libby discovers upon entering Jo’s world that she must rely upon her courage in order to survive. A character-driven novel that ramps up into dangerous thrills, The Warrior Within teaches Libby that she already has everything she needs in order to survive seeming insurmountable odds[JD2].

“Fans of Sookie Stackhouse and A Discovery of Witches will love this romantic page turner.” Christy English, author of How to Tame a Willful Wife and How to Wed a Warrior from Sourcebooks Casablanca.

A trilogy is planned[JD3]. Book 2, A Warrior for Her is in revisions. I also have a spinoff novel roughly 50% completed starring a wolf shifter introduced in Book 2. At least two additional books are taking form in my mind. One may stand alone, or they could both have a tie into the series.

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Silvia's comments: None
Jess's comments:
[JD1] What is that disease?
[JD2] I don’t have a good indication of what the plot is based on this query letter.
[JD3] You always want to make sure your book can be a standalone. It can have series potential, but it should be able to stand on its own. 
Lucy's comments: TBD



First 250 words:


Bobbing my head to the hypnotic beat, I make my way around the dance floor, drinking in the mass of sweat-slicked bodies writhing under flickering strobe lights[JD4]. There is some serious eye candy here tonight. Carefully, I continue along the long side of the L-shaped bar to the hall leading to a single stall bathroom, counting on a shorter line. Don’t ask me why there’s only one stall– but most people opt for the larger bathrooms on the other side of the dance floor. To entertain myself in line, I face the greater room. My body sways slightly to the beat. Damn, I miss dancing. I wish…

No sense getting caught up in wishing.

But the thought sours my enjoyment of watching the dancers. I turn my attention to the people clustered around the bar, entertaining myself with the gay or nay game. Okay, maybe it isn’t a real game. I guess whether I think each person is gay or not[JD5]. It isn’t a very politically correct game, I admit, but it amuses me. HoneyBears is famous for cheap drinks and amazing music so they draw huge mixed crowds every weekend. So, even though they bill themselves as a gay night club, there’s certainly no guarantee that everyone here identifies as such.

Visually, I make my way down the bar, noting to myself gay or nay, while balancing on the cane as I keep the rhythm. My eyes snag on the sexiest butch I’ve ever seen. My mouth goes dry

~~
Silvia's comments: The word count is too long and slightly off-putting; anything above 80,000 words for YA is beyond the maximum word-mark for me. Witches and Vampires are tricky topics as they have been overdone in YA literature and the market feels saturated. The fact that this is presented as a trilogy is also difficult, as it would make for a very hard sell in the current climate.
Jess's comments:
[JD4] Good opening line. 
[JD5] This isn’t really needed as the game feels self-explanatory.
Lucy's comments: TBD
 

Results:

Silvia Monteni: Pass
Jess Dallow: Pass, not the right genre for me
Lucy Irvine: TBD





Thursday, March 18, 2021

March 2021 Pass or Pages Entry #4

It's time for the Pass or Pages feedback reveal!  We're so thankful for our awesome agents Silvia Monteni, Jess Dallow, and Lucy Irvine for taking the time to critique these entries.  And a shout out to the brave authors whose work will be on the blog this week.  You are awesome!

Entry 4: Saigon Sweethearts


Query:


Two hearts, one semester[JD1].

Vivi Nguyen arrived in Saigon, Vietnam, nervous yet giddy for her abroad program. With parents back in the states and freedom at her fingertips, Vivi revelled in the heart of her homeland. It’d be a semester of excitement and adventures—or so she thought, until she met Hang[JD2].

Falling in love was not on the bucket list. The banh mi shop across Vivi’s dorm sells the most delectable banh mi in all of District 1, but it wasn’t the food that captivated her heart. Hang, the young and hardworking shop owner, dreams of becoming an English teacher and providing a better life for her mother.

With only eighty-five days in Vietnam, Vivi finds herself drawn to Hang and the city that haunts her parents. Within bustling Saigon, Vivi must unravel her family history through the tenderness of love; love that is multifaceted and spans through generations of sorrow and hope. From street food dates to kisses in alleyways, the two hearts find themselves alive and in love in the most vibrant city in the world. 


I am seeking representation for Saigon Sweethearts, a YA Contemporary LGBT romance novel complete at 65,000 words. Saigon Sweethearts is The Joy Luck Club meets Loveboat, Taipei meets Heartstopper, written for readers who enjoy a fresh, youthful romance set abroad and stories about familial relationships, as well as those who are seeking POC LGBTQ main characters in the contemporary genre[JD3]. 

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Silvia's comments: None
Jess's comments:
[JD1] I like this opening.
[JD2] Your query letter should be in present tense.
[JD3] This can be deleted since it’s stated above.  
Lucy's comments: TBD
 

First 250 words:


It's 12am in Los Angeles, California. Unlike New York City, LA actually does sleep. The streets are vacant and in a blanket of silence, save for the hum of street cleaners in the early morning down the road.

“Will you be okay?” I wake up groggily from mom’s voice.

“Of course, Mom, I’ll be with Cindy. I’ll be okay.”

Sensing the hint of exhaustion from my voice, mom just squeezes my hand and kisses my forehead. “You know I’ll always worry.”

I slump my head onto her shoulder as she pulls me closer, cherishing our last few moments together before we reach LAX Airport. I try to stretch my arms with the limited amount of space in our small, second-hand Honda. Somehow, dad has managed to sandwich me into the back of the car with mom on one side and the two suitcases containing 70% of gifts for relatives in Vietnam and 30% of my own stuff on the other.

Two more right turns, and it’ll be time for me to board my first ever international flight, and although I should be excited, my head is more preoccupied by not-so-comforting thoughts. My stomach is ridden with anxiety because I thought it was a good idea to stay up late reading about the Malaysian airplane conspiracies. I push the image of plane crashes out of my head while taking a deep breath and mentally calming my nerves. Breathe, Vivi, breathe.

~~
Silvia's comments: I requested pages for this, so I only have positive comments on this query. I am on the hunt for a light-hearted romance, with diverse character and exotic locations, and therefore this sounds very interesting. I’m also fascinated by Vietnam and anything that has to do with the culture. I’d be interested to know if the author is Vietnamese or has any links to the country, as this would be a very important ownvoice/representation requirement.
Jess's comments: None
Lucy's comments: TBD
 

Results:

Silvia Monteni: Pages!
Jess Dallow: Pass
Lucy Irvine: TBD
 
 
 


Wednesday, March 17, 2021

March 2021 Pass or Pages Entry #3

It's time for the Pass or Pages feedback reveal!  We're so thankful for our awesome agents Silvia Monteni, Jess Dallow, and Lucy Irvine for taking the time to critique these entries.  And a shout out to the brave authors whose work will be on the blog this week.  You are awesome!

Entry 3: How to Seduce Four Princes


Query:


Guardswoman Ovelynn can barely juggle her eating disorder and her secret romance with Prince Requin—and that’s before the Sky God accidentally splits her lover into four people. His duplicates will crash the floating Sky Kingdom[JD1] in an explosion of magic, unless all four sleep with someone they love[JD2]. Unfortunately, each prince believes himself to be the only one dating her. To break the spell, she must seduce each one without the others finding out[JD3].

Now she must juggle four different manifestations of Requin’s personality: the romantic, the snobby mama’s boy, the rebel, and the scaredy-cat. After being brutally dumped by one, her eating disorder returns with a vengeance. The Sky God promises to boost her confidence with a magical makeover. Instead, the idiot curses her to transform into a man every night.

Perhaps a happy accident, since at least some of the princes prefer her that way. Using both her identities, Ovelynn has the chance to see all the hidden parts of Requin and overcome her insecurities. But if she loses his love before the moon rises on the seventh day, they’ll both die as their island falls from the sky.

HOW TO SEDUCE FOUR PRINCES is a 79,000-word fantasy romance in the humorous style of Katie MacAlister and Kresley Cole. Inside Out meets an adult Cinderella[JD4] story with LGBTQ+ content. The main character’s bulimia is based on my own experience.

~~
Silvia's comments: None
Jess's comments:
[JD1] In a fantasy novel, it’s good to query with some indication of the world. The characters are important, but so is understanding where it is these people are living. 
[JD2] Are they four thriving, whole people? Do they know the others exist?  
[JD3] If this happens to Requin, why is Ovelynn the one who has to break the spell? 
[JD4] Titles should be capitalized. 
Lucy's comments: TBD


First 250 words:


If you ever visit the flying island of Avacasta, bring a broad-brimmed hat. The guidebook advises this for two reasons: keeping off the never-ending rain and attracting the attention of the town guard as you fall screaming off the edge of a tower with no guardrails.

Guardswoman Ovelynn Oxgourd flew through the storm, reaching for the falling man. Her wings fought against the wind. He screamed. From the roof, his wife screamed even louder. His soaked fedora slapped her face before whipping away. She grabbed the tourist by the back of his collar.

Fortunately, her wings were stronger than her legs. His wailing and arm-flapping didn’t make it easy, but she flew them back to the safety of the rooftop. Then she doubled over, panting. Her wings burned from overexertion. A bubble surrounding her body kept off the rain.

A wet, sobbing woman flung her arms around her husband. She alternated between thanking Ovelynn and threatening to sue every single Sky-Folk in Avacasta.

“I apologize for your poor experience in our country.” Ovelynn used her customer service voice, or as she liked to call it, babytalk for tourists. They were welcome to give their lawsuit a try. Upon entering Avacasta, all tourists signed a ten page waiver devoted to the risks of falling.

The man picked up his wife’s rant. “Half the buildings in this city don’t even have stairs, much less elevators. A drunk flew into our window last night. It hasn’t stopped raining since we got here.”

~~
Silvia's comments: The elevator pitch sounds brilliant, but again I found the blurb of the query difficult to navigate, with all the different personalities and the fantasy elements (names and places); I don’t do a lot of fantasy and any fantasy I would take on would need to be a lot more voice-driven, rather than plot driven. Furthermore, eating disorders are of course a very delicate subject – especially for this age group – and I’m not sure how easy it would be to balance the humour of this story with the seriousness of the topic.
Jess's comments: None
Lucy's comments: TBD

 

Results:

Silvia Monteni: Pass
Jess Dallow: Pass
Lucy Irvine: TBD

 




Tuesday, March 16, 2021

March 2021 Pass or Pages Entry #2

It's time for the Pass or Pages feedback reveal!  We're so thankful for our awesome agents Silvia Monteni, Jess Dallow, and Lucy Irvine for taking the time to critique these entries.  And a shout out to the brave authors whose work will be on the blog this week.  You are awesome!

Entry 2: Humbly Yours, Juliet


Query:


Seventeen-year-old Dungeons & Dragons enthusiast Gage loathes Shakespeare. But when an assignment forces him to join the tens of thousands of people who write a letter to “Juliet” in Verona every year, he asks the Bard’s greatest heroine for advice about his growing feelings for his gender nonconforming best friend, Remy.

Instead of receiving a reply from the Secretaries of Juliet, Gage sees the letters he and his classmates wrote posted anonymously on a website. Remy ignores Gage’s attempts to discuss the epistles, leading a crushed Gage to believe Remy isn’t interested in more than friendship. A mysterious “Juliet” starts responding to the letters and inadvertently reveals a secret of Remy’s that makes his true feelings known, but Gage views the lie as an act of betrayal[JD1]. Despite Remy’s insistence that, like in the Hallmark movies he adores, the deceit is just a big misunderstanding, Gage fears they may have missed their chance at a happy ending. Without a D&D Player’s Handbook to guide him, Gage must decide whether to protect himself from more potential heartache or forgive Remy and roll the dice on romance.

HUMBLY YOURS, JULIET is a contemporary young adult novel (65,000 words) that will appeal to fans of Jenny Han’s To All the Boys I’ve Loved Before and Becky Albertalli’s Simon vs. the Homo Sapiens Agenda[JD2]. It’s a multiple-POV story that also follows a Latina baker trying to use the letters to figure out whether her boyfriend loves her or cheated on her and a goofy actor with a penchant for puns who isn’t sure if the girl of his dreams likes him or his twin brother[JD3].
~~
Silvia's comments: None
Jess's comments:
[JD1] This is a little confusing. What is the lie? 
[JD2] The titles of these books should be capitalized. 
[JD3] If it’s a multi-POV story and these people are important enough to have POVs, I’d like to see how they are included in the plot of the story. It gives good indication if their perspective is necessary.
Lucy's comments: TBD

First 250 words:


Shakespeare is the worst[JD4].

I can’t stifle the sound that escapes when Mr. Bookman announces we’ll be starting Romeo and Juliet. (And no, the irony of an English teacher named Bookman isn’t lost on anyone.) My groan joins a chorus of disapproval. Not from Remy, though. I look at him—today he’s wearing a brown and white striped skirt over green leggings and a green fabric headband thing—and he smiles.

Always one for romance. He might be excited, but I won’t have a clue when the romantic parts are happening, for all the sense the “Bard” makes to me. (I wanted to like Macbeth last year, but the language killed my enthusiasm for the witches and murder.) Flipping quickly through the book, I slump in my seat. It’s hard to say if I’m more depressed by the pages with lots of footnotes or the ones with just a few.

Without wasting any time, we go over the characters, then Mr. Bookman calls two guys to the front and assigns them parts. To read out loud. On day one[JD5]. I could be wrong, but shouldn’t reading Shakespeare have a little foreplay? Maybe some 16th century English lessons before reciting iambic pentameter in front of a crowd?

The guys take the toy swords Mr. Bookman hands them, and the first thing Finn does, of course, is hold it in front of him like a penis. Dick.
~~
Silvia's comments: I found the blurb in the query letter a bit confusing, I struggled to follow who was who, as well as the link between D&D and Shakespeare. I’m also not a fan of To All the Boys I Loved Before, though I appreciate the LQBT angle of this particular query. I also wasn’t entirely convinced by the tone of the opening and was put off by the swearing.
Jess's comments:
[JD4] Love this opening sentence.
[JD5] Day one of what? School or just reading this play?   
Lucy's comments: TBD
 
Results:
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Silvia Monteni: Pass
Jess Dallow: Pass
Lucy Irvine: TBD

Monday, March 15, 2021

March 2021 Pass or Pages Entry #1

It's time for the Pass or Pages feedback reveal!  We're so thankful for our awesome agents Silvia Monteni, Jess Dallow, and Lucy Irvine for taking the time to critique these entries.  And a shout out to the brave authors whose work will be on the blog this week.  You are awesome!

Entry 1: The Governess of Wilderarch Manor


Query:


Dear Awesome Agents, THE GOVERNESS OF WILDERARCH MANOR is an adult historical romance complete at 80,000 words, set in 1850s Nova Scotia. This story takes the sprawling historical romances of Susanna Kearsley’s novels and makes it unabashedly queer (#ownvoices) with some aesthetic inspiration from Portrait of a Lady on Fire.

When her family’s ship sinks with all their financial security, Léonise Browning takes up the mantle of provider [JD1]. She enlists as a governess for the young daughter of a widower. When she arrives at Wilderarch Manor, she is met by his[JD2] inimitable sister, Victoria Carter, a woman she cannot help but fall in love with even as Miss Carter shows her only aloof disdain.

Victoria Carter knows a caged life, engaged to a man she cares not for[JD3], but whose wealth will protect the happiness of her brother and niece. Her resignation is shaken at the arrival of Léonise, a governess unlike any who came before, who also knows the price of sacrifice. Who beckons Victoria to loosen the armour she’s built around her heart.

Dark secrets and societal expectations cast shadows over the love that yearns to blossom between them. Léonise and Victoria must each decide if their love is worth the peril it threatens or succumb to society’s expectations[JD4]. Thank you for your time and consideration,
~~
Silvia's comments: None
Jess's comments:
[JD1] As someone who isn’t quite familiar with this time-period, I’m not quite sure what this means, and therefore would probably stop here. 
[JD2] Whose sister? The widower’s? The paragraph reads as a little confusing and hard to follow.  
[JD3] Keep the wording simple, “she doesn’t care for”
[JD4] I’m not sure what the hook or conflict in this story is, aside from forbidden love.
Lucy's comments: TBD


First 250 Words:


The wedding bells rang their rejoicing hymn. Applause chimed between the peeling as the bride and groom turned from their place at the altar, their faces aglow with the shine of those about to embark upon a new adventure.

Elated cheers shook the small structure of the chapel, reaching to the rafters. Léonise Browning’s heart sank fast, offended by the joy that surrounded her[JD5]. She rose in mechanic synchronicity with the other attendees, throwing rice as they did over the bride and groom hurrying up the aisle, wishing to be far away from this place.

This disaster of a day had broken with the dawn. She’d slept poorly, woken tardy, ripped her best dress in her haste to prepare. On the long walk through the cold, November morning with her mother and father, she’d spotted a bird lying dead in the grass. An ominous sign, it had sent her stomach churning with a deep rooted nausea.

Léonise had hoped to find calm sitting in the house of God, but her dark cloud of lamentation was disturbed by the radiant bliss that reigned around her like a cruel sun off the family and friends gathered to cherish this blessed union. Even her parents wore the guise of delight, though they suffered the same as her. They shamed Léonise in unwitting silence for failing to hide her emotions as well. And so her heart continued to slip down until it lay as shattered at her feet.
~~
Silvia's comments: I am a children’s and YA books agent, I don’t handle adult novels
Jess's comments:
[JD5] This sentence gives good insight into how she’s feeling without saying she’s sad. 
Lucy's comments: TBD
 

Results:

Silvia Monteni: Pass
Jess Dallow: Pass
Lucy Irvine: TBD

 


Thursday, March 11, 2021

Dear O'Abby: What do I do if I want to write horror as a romance author?

 Dear O'Abby,

I'm a fairly successful romance author with 14 published novels.  My publisher wants more because my books sell reasonably well, but the new book I'm working on does not fit with my/their brand - it's a horror and I'm absolutely loving writing it!  

I do plan to write more romance in the future, but right now I'm really enjoying writing something that almost certainly won't have a happy-ever-after ending, and I'm pretty sure I'll write more like this in the future.

Do you have any advice for how to manage my writing career while writing in two very different genres?

Sincerely,

Horrified


Dear Horrified,

I think you'd be surprised how many writers juggle books across a variety of genres.  The reason you may not know about them is because they write each genre under a different name.

Yes, this is a situation where you may want to think about using a pseudonym.  You obviously have a dedicated fan base for your romance novels, and these readers are probably not also avid readers of horror (although some may be).  It is probably not desirable for your current fans to pick up your new book expecting a delightful, frothy romance only to discover something very, very different.

It's also possible (or probable) that your publisher doesn't handle horror either, unless they are large and have a number of different imprints across genres. You don't mention if you have an agent, but if you do, and they have been successfully selling your romances, they may not have the contacts or experience to sell your horror.

Which is another reason to use a pseudonym. You can query agents that specialise in horror without your reputation as a romance writer hanging over you.  Obviously once you accept representation your new agent will need to know your true identity, but while querying, you can do so with a fresh slate and no expectations.

But talk to your existing agent first (if you have one). It's possible they do have the experience and contacts to handle both genres now, even if they didn't at the time you signed with them.  Or if they are part of a larger agency, there may be an agent there who handles horror and will work alongside your current agent to manage this new strand of your career.

Hopefully this helps.  And good luck!  Do let us know how everything goes, and where we can get our hands on your new book.

X O'Abby



Tuesday, March 9, 2021

Spotlight on New Book Debut Author Maria Ingrande Mora #giveaway

Operation Awesome Spotlight #20Questions in #2021 of #NewBook Debut Author posted by @JLenniDorner of @OpAwesome6


Fragile Remedy by Maria Ingrande Mora


LGBTQ+ Science Fiction

1- What is your favorite brunch?

My favorite brunch is outside in the shade on a pretty day with pancakes and mimosas and a side of floppy bacon. I love it when brunch lasts for a couple of hours. I’m a bigger fan of a one-on-one brunch than a group.

2- Would you please, in 160 characters or less, give a #WriteTip ?

Every word counts as practice. Write what feels good. Don’t judge your writing; celebrate your effort.

3- What most motivates you to read a new book?

Usually some element of it catches my attention -- such as a trope I know I love, or a character who sounds like someone I’ll fixate on. Sometimes the concept itself is something I know I’ll love. Lately (basically during the entire pandemic and counting), I’ve had a hard time focusing on sitting down and reading.

4- March is Women's History Month. What contribution or specific achievement by a woman in American history is your favorite? (http://womenshistorymonth.gov)

Mae Jemison went to Stanford at 16, traveled the world with the Peace Corps, worked on critical medical research projects, and then made a career change to become an astronaut and was the first Black woman to go to space. She is so cool. Her foundation, 100 Year Starship ™ ( 100YSS ), is working toward human travel beyond our solar system within 100 years.

5- Would you share a picture with us of your book with a pet?

Spotlight on New Book Debut Author Maria Ingrande Mora #NewBook Fragile Remedy #DebutAuthor #2021Books #LGBTQ #SciFi


6- How far off do you think we are from GEM technology actually existing?

I think we’re already at a place where dehumanization is excused and ignored. From a cultural standpoint, regardless of how close we are technologically speaking, I don’t think we’re particularly far from a situation similar to Gathos city’s GEMs.

7- What's your Twitter handle, and do you have two or three writer friends on there to shout-out to for #WriterWednesday ?

I’m @mariamelee on Twitter. I’d like to shout out @linseymiller and @dancingofpens .

8- Do you have a favorite #bookstagram image or account/ profile?

I love @peireads on Instagram. It’s so cool to me that she balances being a doctor and running a beautiful bookstagram account.

9- Are you a Plotter, Pantser, or Plantser, and how did you adopt that style?

Ugh, I’m a pantser. I’m a pantser. It’s the worst. It’s so hard in revisions. I am TRYING to become a plantser. My current WIP was lightly outlined and lo and behold, it helped a ton.

10- What does your basic writing schedule look like, and how often do you write?

When I’m drafting, I write 5 days a week and aim for at least 500 words a session. I prefer to hit 1000 words a session. I write in the evenings after work and after dinner. When I’m revising, I have a harder time structuring my time but I try to hit a chapter in one session.

11- What is your favorite book by someone else, what's the author's Twitter handle, and what do you love most about that book? #FridayReads book recommendation time!

Author name: TJ Klune @tjklune
Title: The House in the Cerulean Sea
Love because: I don’t read many books shelved for adults, but this one was an absolute delight and so magical and soft. It was nice reading a main character close to my age, too. This is an easy, warm read that feels very cozy.


12- What emotions do you hope your book will evoke for the reader?

Devastation followed by hope.

13- What kind of impact do you hope your book will have?

I’d love for teens to have fun escaping into a high stakes world where characters just happen to be queer.

14- What is your favorite creative non-writing activity to do?

I enjoy cooking every once in a while! It’s nice to follow a recipe and end up with something that feels like a huge accomplishment. I’m not a natural cook but I love eating.

15- In what ways are the main characters in your book diverse? diversebooks.org #WeNeedDiverseBooks

Fragile Remedy’s cast includes gender diversity, queer characters, a character with chronic illness, and characters of color. I am a bisexual cis woman.

16- What method do you feel is the best way to get book reviews?

I am a professional marketer, but when it comes to my writing, I have a very hard time “selling” it. I’d love to know the best way to get book reviews. I believe that when people find a book they connect to emotionally, they want to share that connection with others. So I hope that Fragile Remedy finds its audience.

17- What was the deciding factor in your publication route?

I always knew that I wanted to go traditional publishing. Flux is an indie publisher, and very supportive and hands on. It was important to me to work with a publisher who could help get my book into the hands of teens, educators, and librarians. This is tough the self-publishing route.

18- What's the biggest writing goal you hope to accomplish in your lifetime?

I’d like to remain consistent in my writing and publish books on a regular schedule, even if that schedule is a little slow compared to authors who are able to publish a couple of books a year.

19- Would you please ask our audience a question to answer in the comments?

What’s your favorite tag on AO3?

20- Anything else you would care to share about your book and yourself?

Maria Ingrande Mora is a content designer and a brunch enthusiast. Her love languages are snacks, queer joy, and live music. A graduate of the University of Florida, Maria lives near a wetlands preserve with two dogs, two cats, and two children.

Sixteen-year-old Nate is a GEM—a Genetically Engineered Medi-tissue—created by Gathos City scientists as a cure for the elite from the fatal lung rot ravaging the population. As a child, Nate was smuggled out of the laboratory where he was held captive and taken into the Withers—a quarantined, lawless region. He manages to survive by becoming a Tinkerer, fixing broken tech in exchange for food or a safe place to sleep. When he meets Reed, a kind and fiercely protective boy who makes his heart race, and his misfit gang of scavengers, Nate finds the family he’s always longed for—even if he can’t risk telling them what he is.

But Gathos created a genetic fail-safe in their GEMs—a flaw in their DNA that causes their health to rapidly deteriorate as they age unless they are regularly dosed with medication controlled by Gathos City. When violence erupts across the Withers, Nate’s illegal supply of medicine is cut off, and a vicious attack on Reed threatens to expose his secret. With time running out, Nate is left with only two options: work for a shadowy terrorist organization that has the means to keep him alive, or stay—and die—with the boy he loves.

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Monday, March 8, 2021

OA Recommends - April Blogging from A to Z Challenge #AtoZchallenge

Every month we introduce you to a different writer-oriented website. These are sites with which one or more of our team members has had positive experiences. We hope you'll check them out and let us know what you think!

This month on OA Recommends, we are featuring the April Blogging from A to Z Challenge!  I have personally participated in the Challenge since 2015.  It's fun and also a fun way to be introduced to other bloggers [and have other bloggers introduced to YOUR blog].  Another fun thing this month is I got to interview our very own J Lenni Dorner who is the captain of the A-to-Z Challenge team!  

#atozchallenge 2021 header


1- Are there any big events or exciting news for the A-to-Z Challenge in 2021?

Yes! We, of course, have our usual fun blog hop planned for April, the theme reveal in March, and the reflections post and after survey in May. Plus there's the year-round Road Trip. But we're also promoting the idea of taking a 🎲 gamble on yourself and your blog by this year with a bonus challenge.

2- What's a bonus challenge?

On March 2 there was a post detailing this. We're encouraging bloggers to take the challenge to the next level, to go one step further by doing more this year. 

A lot of enthusiasm vanished from the blogging community last year. Well, we want to bring it back! We want to see bloggers challenge themselves to build the community, make blogging friends, promote themselves, and spread the word about this challenge. 

There's a long list of ideas. We're really hoping bloggers will think of more!

3- Is there a theme for this year's Challenge?

The team and I do try to keep our April posts on the blog as a certain theme. We're playing around with what "21" means to us. 

But what really matters is YOUR theme! And today is the first day to sign-up to share it with the world. The Theme Reveal portion of the hop only lasts for a short time. It's a chance to "preview" some of the blogs that will join in April. It is not required. It is popular and loved.

#atozchallenge 2021 theme reveal


4- How does someone participate in the Challenge?

Sign up! The sign-up will open on March 29. There's a simple to navigate Google Form. After you've signed up, there's a Master List that shows the links to all the participants. Make a copy for yourself. (We suggest making a copy after the sign-up closes, or copy/pasting the additional links to your copy if you take one while people are still signing up.) Be sure to add a participant badge to your blog and grab the alphabet letters for your posts!

In April, you post each day (you get Sundays off for 👼 good 😏 or bad behavior). Your post should somehow relate to that day's letter. For example, April 1 is A, so a post about Apples 🍎 would be appropriate. Whatever fits in your blog's category, or theme for the month, and somehow uses a word that starts with "A." (Though for X, this gets a really broad definition.) 

But posting is just half the challenge. The other part is commenting on the blogs of other participants. And there are a LOT of them! Most people will not make it through the entire list during the month. (I have successfully done it a few times, and let me tell you, it takes several hours a day!) 

5- Are there benefits to participating, besides posting to your own blog daily for a month?

Community. You really get out what you put in when it comes to this. The more blogs you comment on, the more comments you'll get back. Participants are really great at reciprication. A lot of us are seeking to connect, to not just be entertained but to find like-minded bloggers to befriend. Many people who sign up have been doing this for years and are very supportive of each other. 

The A to Z Challenge is where I found my blogging community. I hope others find that as well.
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6- How can participants find other participating blogs to visit?

After signing up, take a look at the Master List. That's the best way to find everyone who is officially in our challenge.

You can also search for the #AtoZchallenge hashtag on your preferred social media. We were using it first. There are others who use it as well, so be aware that the hashtag doesn't always mean someone is taking part in this. (There's even another A to Z Challenge for bloggers in India in April. We get a lot of crossover and confusion because people think signing up on their site also signs them up on ours. That's not the case.)
#AtoZChallenge 2021 April Blogging from A to Z Challenge letter A
Look for blogs that display the participant badge. Or posts that use our letters. That's how you can be assured that you're in the right spot! 

7- Is it just one month of the year, or do you do anything for the other 11 months?

We did a First Annual #AtoZChallenge Book Reviews, Tour, and Blog Hop in 2019.
2019 #atozchallenge book tour
It was a LOT of work to organize. We might do it again, if there's interest. 

The ROAD TRIP encourages people to visit blogs they might have missed during the challenge. (Or revisit.) Stopping by about five blogs a week usually will get you through all the ones you missed in April. (Depending on how active you were during the challenge, of course.)

We try to come up with interesting posts during the year. And we offer some guest posts from time to time (alphabet-related, of course). But the big action is in March when getting ready, in April during the challenge itself, and in May when we wrap up.


8- What is the origin story or history of the site? How many years has the Challenge been going?

Arlee Bird came up with the idea twelve years ago. In 2011, the challenge got a website of its own. He asked me to step up as team captain a few years ago because I give a lot of time and dedication to the challenge. 

9- With all the blogging challenges out there, why should someone take the time to participate in yours; what makes the A-to-Z Challenge unique?

The sheer size and international reach. The hop had 375 participants in 2020-- during a global pandemic! In 2013 there were 1656 participants. 

Also, most blog hops are very specific. We're open to nearly every blog, as long as you can tie your post to the alphabet. 

10- Would you please list the links and ways people can find you?


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Sunday, March 7, 2021

Theme Reveal 2021 #AtoZChallenge #BookReviews

#AtoZChallenge 2021 Theme Reveal


We know we're not a book review blog. We're a blog for writers in every stage of the publication journey!
But...
Well, we're also a bunch of readers. And we so rarely get to share our love of books here.
So, for April 2021, the team will bring you an alphabet of book reviews!
You don't want to miss this.

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Thursday, March 4, 2021

Dear O'Abby, What do I do if my book doesn't sell?

 Dear O'Abby,

My debut novel was published over three months ago, and it really hasn't sold well at all.  I got my first royalty report and it was... well, let's just say it was embarrassing.  I'd planned to splurge on a new dress or pair of shoes with that first cheque, but I ended up celebrating  commiserating with a bottle of off-brand domestic champagne that I bought on special because it was past its best-by date.

What do I do now?  I was so certain it would sell at least a few copies.  I'm realistic enough to know I wouldn't do Stephen King or John Grisham numbers, but this is devastating.

Do you have any advice?

Yours,

Dejected.


Dear Dejected,

All may not be as gloomy as it might seem.  I don't know if you self-published or were published traditionally, but if you just received your first royalty report, it may not include all the sales for your book.  It sometimes takes a while for sales made by third-party retailers to be collated and reported, and you will find these sales will show up in your next royalty report.  I had the same devastating shock when I received my first ever royalty report from my publisher.  Especially since the book had been a best-seller in its category the first weekend it went on sale.

But it could also be that your book really hasn't sold well.  I read somewhere recently that most books published sell 250 copies or fewer.  So at least you're not alone with your miserable royalty report.

As for what to do next, my suggestion would be not to give up.  If you believe in the book, if you're certain it's good and worth the price it's being sold at, keep pushing it.  It doesn't stop being worth selling just because it's not a new release anymore. And don't stop writing either.  Sometimes it takes more than one book to make your mark. 

Maybe your marketing wasn't right.  Take a look at what you did and see if there is more you can do without spending a small fortune.  Remember the idea is to make money and if you spend more on advertising than you earn, you're not making anything.

 If you self-published, take a look at your cover and blurb.  Do they do the book justice?  Are they eye-catching?  Intriguing? A book can sometimes get a whole new life just from a change in cover art or a new, tighter description.

On social media do you just talk about your book?  Or do you engage with people about all sorts of things?  You are not your book and the more you engage with people and let your personality shine through, the more likely people are to be interested in reading your work.  My suggestion would be to only pimp your book occasionally on social media, maybe if it's on sale, or if a particularly good review comes through.  Otherwise, stick to talking and sharing other things.  Engage with people in a genuine way.

Have you had any reviews for the book?  If they're good, use them as marketing material to help push the word out that this is a book worth reading.  If they're not good, look at what the reviewers have said and see if you can use anything they said to your advantage.  I'm not saying to re-write the book based on a couple of reviews, but if a reviewer mentioned poor editing or continuity, if you're a self-publisher, you should be able to fix that.

Reviews are important, so if you didn't reach out to reviewers pre-publication, it's not too late.  You can still get reviews and they will still be valuable.

Just remember that books don't disappear.  The right person might find it in two years' time and sing its praises to the rooftop, sending it skyrocketing to the top of the best-seller list.  Or it might be your next book that really connects with readers, and that will send them searching for anything else you might have written.

Writing and publishing is a long game. It may take years and several books to reach the level of sales you dreamed of.  You might never get to that level of sales. But you're still a published author and you should be proud of that, regardless of if you sell five books or five million.

Hope that helps!

Monday, March 1, 2021

March 2021 Pass or Pages Entry Form!


 

We are now accepting entries for Pass Or Pages! Before you enter, be sure to check out the rules. This month's round of Pass Or Pages is for LGBTQ+ Romance. Any entry not falling under that umbrella will be disqualified. 

The entry window closes on Friday, March 5 at 6 p.m. Eastern.

The form will not allow you to show italics or other formatting, but if your entry is chosen you'll have time to let us know of any formatting you need fixed.

Remember, with great power comes great responsibility! Best of luck!


 



Friday, February 26, 2021

#QueryFriday

 

 

It's time for #QueryFriday! Enter for a chance to win a query critique by yours truly! Here's how to participate:

1. Comment on this post and at least one other post from this week by SUNDAY 02/28 at 12 pm EDT.

2. Leave your email address in the comment or have it available on your Blogger profile. (If I can't find you, I can't get in touch with you!)

The winner will be chosen via random draw and will be announced in the comment section of this post on Sunday.

See this post for additional rules. Good luck!

-Amren

Thursday, February 25, 2021

Dear O'Abby: What's the best giveaway?

 Dear O'Abby,

I have a book coming out soon, and have a fairly substantial blog tour scheduled to promote it.  Some of the hosts have asked if they can do a giveaway as part of the promotion and I was wondering if you had any advice about what might be best to give away in this scenario.

Best,

Prize Challenged


Dear Prize Challenged,

What a great question!  And something that is very top-of-mind for me right now because I have a book releasing this week.

My first piece of advice would be not to offer the book you're promoting as a prize.  At least not in too many places.  You want to sell that book, and if you give it away, you're potentially losing a sale you might have had.

But don't despair!  There are lots of other things you can give away that won't break the bank.

If you have other books, you could offer one or more of these back catalogue titles as a prize. A winner may love the book you send so much they rush out to buy the new one.  And hopefully the rest of your back catalogue too! 

If you don't have back catalogue books, deleted scenes or stories set in the same world as your book can also be a great prize.  Especially if they aren't available anywhere else.  People like to feel that they are getting something unique or special and will value something exclusive far more that something a lot of people have access to.

They say someone has to see your cover seven or more times to remember it, so getting branded swag made with your book cover, website address and purchasing information is a valuable tool for getting the word out.  You can get bookmarks, badges and other swag printed fairly cheaply.  I'm always a big fan of magnets too.  People go to their fridges a lot, and if your magnet is attached, they see your book cover several times a day, even if they're not conscious they're looking at it. Be imaginative about the kind of swag you create.  Tote bags are always handy, and if your readers are out and about, your book cover on a bag could be catching a lot of eyes.

Your book may have a very specific image or symbol that could be made into a brooch or earrings or other piece of jewellery or ornament.  If these are limited in number, they are even more valuable.

Another thing you can offer is the opportunity for your winners to be in your next book - promise to name a character after them.  This is doubly effective, because if they're promised a character, you've probably already sold them your next book.

If you're not shy or phone-phobic, you can offer your winners an opportunity to speak to you on the phone or via Zoom or Skype.  You may want to make it clear ahead of time how long you are willing to talk, and if there are subjects you don't want to discuss, put that up front too.  

With so much modern communication happening online these days, getting a hand-written letter in the mail is really special.  Offer to hand-write a letter or postcard to a contest winner.

And anything you can autograph, do.  You may not believe your signature is worth anything, but to your readers is might be.  Especially if you can personalize the autograph to the person who will be receiving it.  Obviously this isn't always possible, especially if, like me, you're living in a remote location where shipping signed books can cost a small fortune, and it's easier to get prizes sent to the recipient directly from a retailer.  But you can create book plates that can be emailed to the prize winner so when their copy arrives, they can print it on a sticker or glue the bookplate into the front of the book.

That's a few ideas.  At the end of the day, your imagination is the limit.  Just don't go overboard when it comes to spending money. A lot of promotion can be done very cheaply, and the most valuable giveaways are often the things that only cost you your time.

Good luck with your release!

X O'Abby




Wednesday, February 24, 2021

Spotlight on New Book Debut Author Halli Gomez #giveaway

Operation Awesome Spotlight #20Questions in #2021 of #NewBook Debut Author posted by @JLenniDorner of @OpAwesome6


List of Ten by Halli Gomez


Be sure to check out the GIVEAWAY for List of Ten book swag which includes a journal, bookmark, and sticker.


1- How did you get into teaching martial arts and what does it mean to be a fourth degree black belt?

I started martial arts for my kids when they were young because I loved the life skills. Not long into it, I was hooked. I guess my excitement was obvious because my instructors at the time asked if I wanted to become an instructor. Becoming a fourth degree black belt was a big accomplishment for me. I was older when I started training, and never dreamed I’d get this far, but I put my heart and soul into it and wouldn’t let myself give up.

2- Would you please, in 160 characters or less, give a #WriteTip ?

Stories are subjective. There are books you love and books you don’t. Just because your story isn’t right for one doesn’t mean it’s not perfect for another.

3- What most motivates you to read a new book?

I hate to admit this out loud, and on internet where it will live long after me, but when I was young, I was drawn to books by their titles. I did find great books that way, but also missed quite a few. Now that I’m older, I look at them in different ways and focus on genres, plots, and authors.

4- What are the most common misconceptions about Tourette syndrome?

The most common misconception about Tourette syndrome is that everyone has coprolalia, which is the use of uncontrolled abusive, obscene, or offensive language. Of course that is one of the most shocking tics, and therefore newsworthy, but the percentage of people with it is actually very low.

5- Would you share a picture with us of your book and dog?

#NewBook #DebutAuthor #2021Books Spotlight on New Book Debut Author Halli Gomez


6- What are some ways a teen contemplating suicide might best get help?

In my opinion, the number one way to get help is to ask for it. I know that is the hardest thing to do. Not just for teens but adults as well. There are many places to find help for people contemplating suicide – the suicide hotline, teachers and counselors at school, doctors, and many others. I spoke with a psychologist while compiling the discussion questions for LIST OF TEN and she strongly encourages teens seek out an adult. Friends may feel the need to keep it secret or believe they can help. What someone thinking about suicide really needs is to speak with a professional. Suicide hotline: 800-273-8255.
There's also a website: https://suicidepreventionlifeline.org

7- What is your favorite book to movie adaptation?

My all-time favorite book to movie adaption has to be the Harry Potter series mainly because of the way the set designers recreated the detail and magnitude of the Hogwarts castle and grounds. A few years ago, I went to the Universal Studio in London and saw a lot of the sets and castle miniatures. It is so interesting to learn the behind the scenes tricks.

8- When did you first know you wanted to publish a book someday?

I hear a lot of stories about authors who knew they wanted to publish books as a child. Way back then, I was content to just read them. I didn’t even start writing until I was an adult and moved to NC. I had no job, my kids were in school, and I thought, hey, why not try this writing thing. Many years later, here I am!

9- Are you a Plotter, Pantser, or Plantser, and how did you adopt that style?

I am definitely a Plantser. I start with ideas for a story and plot it out the old-fashioned way - on paper. As I begin to write the story, I find new ideas creep in or the characters decide they want to go in different direction. Who am I to ignore them? And oh, the thought of not exploring a possibly better storyline, I wouldn’t be able to live with myself.

10- What does your basic writing schedule look like, and how often do you write?

My writing schedule is best described as whenever time allows. I would love to write for hours during the day when the hubby is at work and my son at school, but I can never find the uninterrupted time. I do try to write every day, but it is usually when I can find time. So, a little in the morning, afternoon, and evening.

11- What is your favorite book by someone else, what's the author's Twitter handle, and what do you love most about that book? #FridayReads book recommendation time!

This is the hardest question I have ever been asked! There are SO MANY good books out there. I will give a shout out to the authors in my debut group, #the21ders. Readers – you are in for a treat this year! But if I must pick one. I can’t. Here are two (both debuts)
Author name: James Matejek-Morris @mjatejekmorris
Title: My Ex-imaginary Friend
Love because: I love how the author used creativity and originality to tell the story of divorce and mental illness in a family.
Check out the interview with this author!
Author name: Cory Anderson @coryanderwrites
Title: What Beauty There Is
Love because: The characters and story are captivating and haunting. I couldn’t put the book down.


12- What emotions do you hope your book will evoke for the reader?

I wrote LIST OF TEN without sugarcoating anything because that’s not how real life is, and I know this may sound mean, but I want readers feel everything. The good, bad, and ugly. Early praise makes me feel like I have accomplished that goal. Reviewers used words powerful, heartfelt, and humorous. They laughed and cried.

13- What kind of impact do you hope your book will have?

I hope LIST OF TEN reaches the people who are in the same or a similar circumstance or feel lonely. This book was written, in part, so people feel seen and understood. I also hope it touches others and makes them rethink how they look at and treat others.

14- What is your favorite creative non-writing activity to do?

This will sound strange since we have all been on some sort of lockdown for almost a year, but my favorite non-writing activity is being locked in escape rooms. I love the creativity of the stories and puzzles, and it’s a great activity to do as a family.

15- In what ways are the main characters in your book diverse? diversebooks.org #WeNeedDiverseBooks

LIST OF TEN is an own voices novel and definitely fits in the diverse book movement. Tourette syndrome and obsessive-compulsive disorder are characterized as neurodiverse. In other words, variations of the brain. Both neurodiverse characters and authors are underrepresented in publishing today.

16- What method do you feel is the best way to get book reviews?

Begging your friends and family? And writing the best book you can, of course.

17- What was the deciding factor in your publication route?

I know people who have self-published, but I never considered it. You have to be able to market yourself and your book well because if you don’t, no one will. I don’t have the right personality for it. I am way too shy.

18- What's the biggest writing goal you hope to accomplish in your lifetime?

My mother and I always joked that seeing my book on a bookstore shelf would be the ultimate! And it will be incredible. But since I started writing, I began looking at what it really means to be a reader involved in a story. Now my goal is to write stories that move people. My biggest goal is to write a lot of them!

19- Would you please ask our audience a question to answer in the comments?

What is one thing that puts a story on the top of your favorite list or buried on the bottom never to be seen again?

20- Anything else you would care to share about your book and yourself?

I love this comment from a fellow debut author. This is what I hope all readers walk away feeling “LIST OF TEN begs for compassion and hope, making it a story that will stay with the reader long after the final page.”
Halli Gomez teaches martial arts and writes for children and teens. When no one is looking, she sock skates through the house and talks to dogs like they are human. When people are looking, she enjoys reading, outdoors, and breaking out of escape rooms with her family. Halli lives in North Carolina. LIST OF TEN (Sterling Teen, March 16, 2021) is her debut young adult novel.

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Tuesday, February 23, 2021

March 2021 Pass Or Pages Agent Panel Reveal!

 

 

Meet the agents who will critique your LGBTQ+ Romance entries!

 

 Silvia Molteni

Silvia Molteni

Peters Fraser and Dunlop Group

Silvia Molteni is the head of the children’s and YA books department at PFD. She manages her own list of clients alongside selling foreign rights in our children’s and YA titles worldwide. Silvia also handles all audio rights for the agency. The Bookseller named Silvia 2019’s Rising Star. Across MG and YA fiction, Silvia is drawn to voice-driven and character-driven narratives, LGBTQI story-lines and characters, endearing narrators, magical realism and upmarket literary fiction.


 

Jess Dallow

Brower Literary and Management

Having grown up with the same name as her favorite Sweet Valley High twin, Jess has always had a love for books, especially those that feature child psychopaths, platonic friendships between men and women, a romance that makes her heart beat faster, and serial killers. She has a BFA in Writing for Film and Television from the University of the Arts and worked in entertainment for eight years before returning to her home state of NY where she worked at a literary agency for two years before joining Brower Literary & Management.


Lucy Irvine

Lucy Irvine

Peters Fraser and Dunlop Group

Lucy Irvine is an Associate Agent, working primarily on PFD’s children’s list. After graduating from University College London with an MA in Issues in Modern Culture in 2017, she interned at Agora Books, PFD’s publishing arm, before becoming assistant to CEO Caroline Michel. She began building her own list in the summer of 2019. Alongside building her own list of clients, Lucy sells foreign rights in children’s and YA titles in Eastern Europe and Russia, and handles audio narration rights for the agency. Lucy is always looking for diverse protagonists across race, sexuality and gender. Lucy is particularly keen on fantasy, sci-fi, and speculative fiction, and in these genres will read submissions aimed at adults as well as children’s and YA.

 

Details for March 2021 Pass or Pages: 

Entry starts: Monday, March 1st at 6 a.m. Eastern

Entry ends: Friday, March 5 at 6 p.m. Eastern
Category/Genre: LGBTQ+ Romance!
How To Enter: Fill out the entry form on the contest post when it goes live on March 1.
What Is Required: Your query (NO BIO or personalization for agents), your first 250 words, a complete and polished MS

You can also read more about the rules 
here.

The winning entries with agent commentary will be posted on Operation Awesome the week of March 15th, one entry each day. If you aren't comfortable with having your entry (which will be anonymous) shared on the blog, please don't enter Pass or Pages!


If you have any questions, please ask in the comments or tweet 
@OpAwesome6. Also, feel free to chat about the contest with fellow participants with the hashtag #PassOrPages.

 

Monday, February 22, 2021

Writer's Block

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One topic that blog readers suggested for OA to address in 2021 was resources to fight writer's block.  Here are some suggestions and links for additional information:

Writers on writer's block
Some writers don't believe in writer's block, others do

Reedsy's 20 suggestions to overcome writer's block
Including developing a writing routine and writing something else

Writing Cooperative
Including read [learn from other writers] and write a short story

Master Class
Including do something else, start in the middle, and freewriting

Writing Prompts
https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/
https://www.writersdigest.com/prompts

I like the ideas to write something else and to start in the middle.  The writing prompts sites are also interesting.  I went to the first one [Reedsy] and, because I write MG, set the drop-down to "for kids".  The first prompt was "Write about someone taking a child trick-or-treating for the very first time."  This actually ties in with my current WiP, so if I was stuck on my story at this point, using this prompt would have definitely helped me get unstuck.

What do you do when you're blocked?


Thursday, February 18, 2021

Flash Fiction Friday 57 #FlashFiction

 It's Flash Fiction Friday! I'm moving to a new house this weekend, so our prompt is A New Start.

[Image: Text "RESIST" with raised fists]
Length: 2000 words
Deadline: Sunday, February 21, 2021, 2am Central Standard Time

Leave your entry in the comments, please. As always, the winner will get a badge and bragging rights!