Showing posts with label mystery. Show all posts
Showing posts with label mystery. Show all posts

Wednesday, October 3, 2018

Kari Bovee's Operation Awesome Debut Author Spotlight and Emerging First Book

Debut Author Spotlight from @JLenniDorner on @OpAwesome6

Girl with a Gun: An Annie Oakley Mystery by Kari Bovee


1- I read a quote. "When a man hits a target, they call him a marksman. When I hit a target, they call it a trick." It was attributed to Annie Oakley. Someone else argued she never said it. Thoughts?

I have never seen this come across in any of my research. I think Annie was pretty well respected for her marksmanship by men and women alike, and she truly appreciated her fans.

2- Would you please, in 160 characters or less, give a #WriteTip ?

Write what you want to write, not what the market dictates. If you aren’t completely sold on what you are writing, no one else will be sold on it either.

3- What's one thing most people don't know about horses?

Many people don’t appreciate what sensitive beings horses are--emotionally and physically. Because they are large and strong, people think they need to be muscled around. You really don’t need to bully them to get what you want. When a horse acts out, it is usually due to fear or pain, or a horrible memory of either. That doesn’t mean you should be a push-over for your horse, that would be irresponsible and dangerous, but learning to communicate with them is key. In the wild, horses look for leadership in the herd. It’s important to learn how to be a leader to your horse. Show him respect and leadership, and he will be a willing partner.

4- What ignited your passion for writing?

Reading. I’ve always loved books and getting lost in a story. Reading and writing can transport you to anywhere you want to go—and even some places you don’t, which is pretty powerful. From a very young age, I’ve always liked the idea of letting my imagination soar and creating a world of my own.

5- Annie Oakley has an Indian assistant in your book. Where or what tribe is that person from?

Kimimela is a fictional character, but she is from the Lakota Sioux tribe. Many of the performers in Buffalo Bill’s Wild West show were Sioux, so I thought it fitting. In my story, Kimi’s parents were killed by some of Buffalo Bill Cody’s men when he was an Indian Scout. He felt bad for Kimi and her brothers, so he took them home to be raised by his wife, and then later brought them to his show where he employed them.

6- What's your Twitter handle, and do you have two or three writer friends on there to shout-out to for #WriterWednesday ?

My Twitter handle is @KariBovee. Shout outs to @michellecox33, @marthaconway, and @KristenNoelFischer

7- Would you share a picture with us of your book with a horse?

Love of horses - Kari Bovee's Operation Awesome Debut Author Spotlight and Emerging First Book

Photo of me and my horse, Handsome. Handsome was the inspiration for Annie's horse Buck in my books!

8- What are some of your short and long term writing goals?

Short term: To release the second and third books in the Annie Oakley series, and to launch another series that I’ve been working on.

Long term: To keep writing no matter what! I have so many ideas for books, I want to just keep going and going and going!

9- What is your favorite book by someone else, what's the author's Twitter handle, and what do you love most about that book? #FridayReads book recommendation time!

Author name: Elizabeth Crook
I don’t know if she has a Twitter handle, I’ve seen posts about her, but not by her. I tried to look her up and didn’t find anything. If you are out there Elizabeth, I will follow you!!
Title: The Night Journal
Love because: The book was a pick from someone in my book club and I absolutely loved it, partly because it takes place in New Mexico, where I am from, but mostly because she handled the story of present day with the story from the past so beautifully. Her imagery of the southwest, particularly of New Mexico was breathtaking!

10- What emotions do you hope your book will evoke for the reader, and is there a particular scene you hope will resonate with readers?

What I hope readers get out of my book is a sense of hope and empowerment. Especially women. Annie Oakley came from nothing, was catapulted to fame for her talents, and took the world by storm in a man’s game. She never felt the need to be anyone other than herself. She never forgot where she came from and she never let fame give her an inflated sense of herself. She seemed to be a person entirely comfortable in her skin, no matter what the circumstance.

11- What most helped you to improve your writing craft?

I think it’s a constant desire to learn. I’ve attended many workshops on craft, online and live. Some of my favorite teaching authors are Alexandra Sokoloff with her Screenwriting Tricks for Authors (@AlexSokoloff), Larry Brooks’ Story Engineering (@storyfix), and Donald Maass’ Writing the Breakout Novel (@DonMaass). Margie Lawson (@MargieLawson) does some really intensive writing and editing workshops and I’ve attended several of her Immersions. I’m always looking for retreats or workshops where I think I will learn something new. Also, hiring professional editors has improved my craft because I learn so much from their critique. It takes a while to find one that really resonates with you, but once you do, it’s so helpful.

12- Where do you stand on gun control versus gun rights?

Conflicted!

13- What is the most memorable trait or visual oddity of one of your characters?

I think for Annie Oakley it was her size. She was very tiny, 5’ tall, and slight with a very small waist, but she was pretty tough. Also, she always dressed extremely modestly – covered from head to toe, never showing any skin.

14- In what ways are the main characters in your book diverse? https://diversebooks.org #WeNeedDiverseBooks

Kimimela, Annie’s Indian Assistant is diverse in many ways. She is shunned and actually hated by another character in the book, simply because she is Native American, and she is shunned by many of her own people in the show because her daughter is usual and of uncertain birth. (Don’t want to give a spoiler!) The Native American peoples during the time period of this book (1885) were being taken off their lands and carted to reservations across the country. Buffalo Bill hired many of them on at very good wages to perform in his show. The entire show was a caricature and exaggeration of the Wild West which was dying. I’m sure some people took offense, but it was also extremely popular.

15- Which character has your favorite Personality Contradiction?

I think the journalist Emma Wilson. Emma came from an incredibly wealthy family, but when her mother and father insisted she marry “of her class” she totally rebelled and got engaged to a police officer and became a journalist resulting in her being cut off from the family fortune. What her mother doesn’t know, is that her father has forgiven her and still gives her a generous allowance. Emma loves getting her hands dirty with work, but also loves her fine clothes, being pampered, and having high tea. She is so much fun, I’d love to hang out with her.

16- Who is your favorite woman of political power and influence from history, and why?

Probably Elizabeth I of England because she was the longest ruling female monarch until Queen Victoria. She did it her way. She was under constant pressure to marry, but she knew if she did, she would have to give up ultimate control of the country to her husband. I think that must have been incredibly difficult at that time, but she had a vision for what she wanted and how she wanted to rule, and she wasn’t swayed.

17- Can you think of any small change in the world you could make to benefit hundreds of other authors or readers potentially?

I would love to explore the idea of creativity workshops. I’d like to inspire other authors and readers to embrace their creativity and their imagination. Creativity is something that needs to be nurtured, and we live in a world where it is often squashed. Even if people can’t make a living with their creativity, they can still indulge themselves in it. Everyone has creativity in them, and if people allowed themselves to explore their creativity, the world would be a better place.

18- As a reader, what most motivates you to buy a new book to read?

I love covers, so the cover has to attract me first. Then I read the back blurb, and if I’m still not completely sold, I read the first page or two. I think it’s pretty common, which is why these things are all so important for authors to know.

19- How will you measure your publishing performance?

Well, number of books sold is a good measure, but I write because I want to connect with people, to share with them and entertain them, so a good fan base would also be a great measure for me.

20- What's the best book marketing strategy you've come across?

I’m still figuring that out. My novel came out in June of 2018, and I just released another one on September 18. I’m still in the learning phase with marketing, but from what everyone has told me, generating content is the best thing you can do to improve your sales. Keep the books coming. Writing and publishing is a long game. Nothing happens quickly, so the key is to get yourself out there. Learn about marketing strategies and try different things.

21- What is one question or discussion topic which you would like the readers of this interview to answer or remark on in the comments?

I think the question regarding women of political power in history. I like to write about empowered women in history, so it always interests me who people have liked or admired in the past—or the present.

22- Anything else you would care to share about your book and yourself?

Blurb for Girl with a Gun:



Fifteen-year-old Annie Oakley is the sole supporter of her widowed mother and two younger siblings. An Expert markswoman and independent spirit, she hunts game to sell to the local mercantile to make ends meet instead of accepting a marriage proposal that could solve all her problems, including the impending foreclosure of her family’s farm.

After a stunning performance in a shooting contest against famous sharpshooter Frank Butler, Annie is offered a position in the renowned Buffalo Bill’s Wild West Show. Finally, she has a chance to save her family’s farm—and make her dreams come true. But after her catapult to fame, a series of crimes take place in the Wild West Show including the death of Annie’s Indian assistant. The coroner claims the death was due to natural causes, but Annie is unconvinced. Then her prized horse, Buck—a major part of her act—is stolen, and she realizes that someone is out to get her.

With the help of a sassy, blue-blooded reporter, Annie sets out to find her horse, solve the crimes, and clear her good name—before everything she’s worked for is destroyed.

Bio:



Empowered women in history, horses, unconventional characters, and real-life historical events fill the pages of award-winning writer Kari Bovee’s historical mystery musings and manuscripts.

Born in northern New Mexico, Kari developed a love of reading, writing, and history early in life. Her most treasured Christmas gift as a young child was a toy typewriter. After graduating with a B.A. in English Literature with an emphasis in Creative Writing, Kari found work as a technical writer at a Fortune 500 tech company. But, her love of story-telling never waned. While staying at home with two young children, Kari wrote her first novel and hasn’t stopped. She and her husband live happily in rural Corrales, New Mexico with their horses, dogs, and cats.

Social media links:



Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/KariBovee/
Twitter: https://twitter.com/KariBovee
Pinterest: https://www.pinterest.com/karibovee
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/karibovee_writer



Girl with a Gun: An Annie Oakley Mystery by Kari Bovee

Thursday, February 16, 2017

Synopsis Critique #2 - MG Paranormal Mystery

And now, it's time for this week's synopsis critique! The author of RED-EYED DANIEL, a 76,000-word MG Paranormal Mystery, submitted this synopsis. My in-line comments are [blue and in brackets], and I'll include a summary at the end. Feel free to comment below!

If you'd like a primer on how to write a synopsis, see my posts here and here. And if you want your synopsis critiqued on this website, fill out the form here, or email your 1-2 page synopsis to me at operationawesome6@gmail.com, and I'll post one critique per week (NOTE: I'll email my critique to the author as soon as I'm done, so the author won't have to wait to see his/her synopsis on the site). Thanks for participating!

Synopsis

Thirteen-year old DANIEL VENTURE breaks out in blisters, and this ruins his life: he never invites kids over, doesn’t go to the pool, and doesn’t go to school. [This is a great start, really situating us in Daniel's 'normal life.' But it seems like the blisters must be really painful and/or disfiguring for him to have such an unusual life because of them - consider adding a little detail here describing his condition.] He visits a doctor to treat his condition, but discovers that she has zero intentions to cure him. [Is this the first doctor he's ever seen for this condition? Or is she a new doctor, or supposed to be some kind of specialist?] Instead, the doctor kidnaps his mother to a parallel world. [Has Daniel ever had any indication before this that parallel worlds existed? That his mother would be the target of a kidnapping? If so, integrate a little back-story here. If not, describe Daniel's surprise at this turn of events.] For the opportunity to search for his mother, Daniel trades his eyes. [Who does he trade them to? How? Consider making the last two sentences of this paragraph a separate paragraph and spending a little more time fleshing them out. The visit to the doctor (and subsequent kidnapping of Daniel's mother) seems to be your inciting incident, so they shouldn't be buried at the end of a bigger paragraph.] He wakes up in a parallel universe, haunted by demons. [Is it the universe or Daniel that is haunted by the demons?] Daniel discovers that while he was unconscious, a local doctor named DAVID LODNER filled his empty eye sockets with artificial red eyes. [Was the doctor local to the parallel universe or Daniel's original world? Any relation to the doctor who kidnapped his mother?] With these new eyes Daniel sees a walking demon-skeleton with sharp nails pierce a woman’s shoulder and realizes that he is incapable of battling his mother’s kidnapper, who is a demon herself. [How does he realize this? Does he attempt to save the woman and fail? Also, do the new eyes give Daniel any other abilities or powers?] To gain the knowledge of fighting demons ['To learn how to fight demons' is a little more straightforward], Daniel enlists in a military academy. [More detail about this parallel world would be helpful to situate the reader. Is it just like Daniel's world or are there significant differences (other than the demons)? A sentence or two describing the parallel world would help here - Daniel wouldn't be able to enlist himself in a military academy in his world, but he can here. How?] But the Chief Commander calls roll in the middle of the first night: something has been stolen and the thief is suspected to be nearby. Soon Daniel overhears a conversation between two teachers and learns that his dead father was once working on the reproduction of a secret device called the Pyramid Diamond, whose blueprints were stolen from the Commander. [What does 'reproduction of a secret device' mean? Recreating a device that existed at some point before? If not, then 'production' works better.] Daniel is convinced that his mother was kidnapped because she had classified information about the Diamond. [I really like this. Daniel's learning more about his parents and his real life, and his call to action can't be far off...] Daniel and his new friend BEN LODNER—David’s son [consider using 'Dr. Lodner' throughout instead of 'David,' because that's presumably how Daniel would think of him]—suspect that the thief is the class bully, after they see his silhouette near their guard booth. They give chase, but accidentally find themselves near a pub full of demons. Peeking into the pub, Daniel spots the kidnapper. [consider saying, 'his mother's kidnapper' so we know it's the doctor from Daniel's real world] But to get in and confront her, he needs a demon companion.
Daniel and Ben investigate a bit more, and learn that the Pyramid Diamond is a powerful weapon that can transfer telekinetic energy between demons and people, and vice versa. [Connect the dots here between what the Diamond does and the fact that it's powerful - what does it mean to transfer telekinetic energy? How does that help demons or people? Does it allow them to be stronger, quicker, etc.?] After Daniel and Ben successfully catch a giant bee demon, they are convinced that they can enter the pub and catch the bully helping the kidnapper to recreate the Pyramid Diamond. [Why are they sure it's the bully? And if they can get into the pub, why wouldn't they catch the kidnapper, who we know is in there, as opposed to just catching the bully? And I'm still a bit confused about recreating the Diamond... if the Diamond is an old device that was destroyed, or something along those lines, tell us that.] When they enter the pub, it’s not the bully they find, but David. [Again, I think using 'Dr. Lotner' works better] He was the one they had seen during their guard duty, and he was the true thief. [How do they find out? Does he confess?] Even worse, when David implanted Daniel his artificial eyes, he wasn’t doing him a favor. On the contrary—these eyes were used as a surveillance system, meant to follow Daniel all the time. [Nice twist.] David confesses that he did it because the king of all demons promised to bring his dead wife—Ben’s mother—back to life. And now, with the Pyramid Diamond finally complete and Daniel fallen into his trap, David can summon the king—Asmodeus. [Why does Asmodeus need Daniel? You get into it in the next paragraph, but some hints in this paragraph would help connect them.] Asmodeus appears and tells Daniel that his mother was used as bait to lure Daniel into the parallel world because what Admodeus really desires is Daniel’s immense telekinetic energy, which he will steal using the Pyramid Diamond. [Ah. This is a great reveal. Are there hints earlier on that Daniel has this power? If so, drop a hint earlier in the synopsis] But he also offers Daniel to spare his mother’s life if Daniel joins his army of demons. [A little awkward. Consider, 'But he also tells Daniel he will spare his mother's life...'] Daniel refuses and Asmodeus begins draining Daniel’s energy. [Why does Daniel refuse? I could see not wanting to join an army of demons, but his mother's life is at stake and earlier, he traded his eyes to search for her, so she must be important to him. Does he not trust Asmodeus to keep his word? Or something else?] But then Daniel realizes that in order to destroy Asmodeus he must destroy his demonic eyes. [How does he realize this?] He yanks out his eyes, and stabs them with a knife. Asmodeus is destroyed and Daniel loses consciousness. When he wakes up in the infirmary, he can see with only one eye because the other one was beyond repair. The Chief Commander tells him that Asmodeus was only receiving orders from another, more powerful, demon—Azazel—and as long as Daniel is not caught his mother will be safe. When Daniel gets back to the academy, students look at him with fear and admiration. Though his mother is still held hostage, Daniel’s battle with the demon has made him stronger: he will plot the best attack so the next time he fights Azazel, Daniel will save his mother and come out victorious. [If he's at the academy, wouldn't it be easy for Azazel to track him down?] [Does he ever go back to his original life? Can he? Whatever happened to his blisters? Did they disappear when he went into the parallel world?]

Summary

This is a neat concept with some great twists and turns! My main critiques boil down to two areas:

(1) Connect the dots. For example, explaining that the Diamond imparts telekinetic powers doesn't mean much to me as a non-scientist. If those telekinetic powers enable the user to fly, or see through walls, etc., then that description has a lot more impact on the reader.

(2) I had a lot of questions throughout that amounted to Why? or How? Consider these questions as you read through again, and try to answer them briefly. For example, how does Daniel realize he must destroy his demonic eyes to destroy Asmodeus? Does someone tell him? Does he read about it somewhere? Adding even a short phrase to that sentence explaining how Daniel comes to realize this fact helps the reader with the plot flow.

Best of luck with the manuscript!

Monday, February 17, 2014

All Cons Great and Small



My last post, Conference Season Is Upon Us, mentioned some strategies for finding financial help to attend cons (conferences and conventions).

Today I'm going to list some cons, and I know for sure that I'm bound to miss some, so feel free to link to your overlooked favorite in the comments!

In no particular order, here are some venues you might want to check out:

Mysteries:

Bouchercon: Murder at the Beach, Nov. 13-16, Long Beach, CA 
Sisters in Crime have a number of regional and national events throughout the year
Crime Writers Association offers the same sort of events in the UK
Mystery Writers of America holds a full day MWA University

Romance:
Romance Writers of America has a national conference as well as regional chapter events
RT Booklovers Convention brings together romance writers and their fans

Children's, including YA:
Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators has national and regional events throughout the year
YA Fest, April 19, Easton, PA
UtopYA Con, June 20-22, Nashville, TN
Austin Teen Book Festival, 2014 date TBA (in Sept 2013), Austin, TX
YALLFest, 2014 date TBA (in Nov 2013),Charleston, SC

Horror:
World Horror Convention, May 8-11, Portland, OR

Science fiction/fantasy, including steampunk:
Hal-Con, Nov. 7-9, Halifax, Nova Scotia
Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers of America's events include the Nebula Awards weekend
Comic-Cons happen in virtually every big city now, but the biggest are in San Diego and NY
DragonCon, Aug. 29- Sept. 1, Atlanta, GA
CONvergence, July 3-6, Twin Cities, MN
Broad Universe promotes sff/horror writing by women and has an extensive calendar of cons*
FOGcon, March 7-9, Walnut Creek, CA
RavenCon, April 25-27, Richmond, VA
Megacon, March 21-23, Orlando, FL
Steamcon VI, Oct. 3-5, Bellevue, WA
Gaslight Gathering 4, May 2-4, San Diego, CA
The Steampunk World's Fair, May 16, Piscataway, NJ

*I seriously mean "extensive calendar of cons"--I should have just started here, and it would have saved me a lot of researching. A list of more steampunk cons can also be found here.

Online Cons:
IndieReCon, Feb. 25-27, with a focus on indie/self publishing
WriteOnCon, dates TBA (last year it was in Aug), with a wide range of genres & categories

Feel free to add your favorite con in the comments!

Friday, January 25, 2013

2013 Excitement and Mystery...

by Jeannie Lynn Paske


Excitement this week:


Excitement this MONTH! 


2013 is shaping up to be an incredible year, and we aren't even out of January yet! 

As much fun and excitement as we've had on the blog out in the open, there's been additional awesomeness going on behind the owlery drapes. Mysterious owlish stuff...

Beginning on Monday, January 28th, we're going to have some big announcements (hint: they include more contests, and that's not even the exciting part!). Note: we won't have a February Mystery Agent contest as we are just catching our breath after NYRC 2013.

We have more Operation Awesome book news coming down the pike, but that's not my news to share, so I'll let you wonder...

*insert fog machine here*

hee hee

I also have some personal news which I'm sure I'll be blogging more about in the future. It involves the publishing industry, but doesn't involve any of my books. 

Riddle, riddle, riddle. 

I'd make a terrible Sphinx. 
 
by ~Nathali

I'd love to hear from you what wonderful, mysterious things are you anticipating in 2013? (ooh, especially tell me about book releases, yours or your favorites)