Tuesday, August 13, 2019

#FirstPageImpressions 08/13/19

It's been a while, but...



#FirstPageImpressions has been on vacation, but now we're back! 
That first page is so important, and I hope this event will provide some solid feedback that will help you improve your work. I'm so excited to see your first pages! All age categories and genres welcome :)

Here's how to participate:

1. Comment on this post and at least one other post from this week by Thursday, August 15, 2019 at 12:00 pm EST.

2. Leave your email address in the comment or have it available on your Blogger profile. (If you don't, I can't find you to give you your critique!)


For a rules refresher, please visit this post.

The winner will be announced in the comment section of this post on Thursday evening. Best of luck!

Monday, August 12, 2019

Library summer reading program

Ahhhh.  Back-to-school season.  Remember that Staples commercial playing "The Most Wonderful Time of the Year"?  Moms and dads are smiling and dancing.  The kids are frowny.  LOVE IT!
In SoCal where I live, the first day of the school year in some districts is this week!
When I was in school, waaaaaaaaaaay back in the last century [literally], it always started the Tuesday or Wednesday after Labor Day.  Here's a really informative CNN article about why the school year now usually starts before Labor Day.

My local library hosts a Summer Reading Program which runs mid-June to mid-August.
Anyone can sign up, even adults.  Prizes include free books, games, puzzles, and other fun stuff.  Here's a puzzle one of my kids won last year:
Yes, he did finish it
The first year I participated, I won the grand prize!  An iPad Mini.  I still use it today to read e-books.

Do you, or your kids, participate in a summer reading program?  Tell us in the comments!


Thursday, August 8, 2019

Dear O'Abby: How do I get more reviews?

Dear O’Abby,

I’m a published author with four books released, but sales are slow and despite working really hard to get reviews on Amazon – which I have been led to believe are the key to good sales – they are really hard to get. The reviews I’ve had have been good, mainly 3-5 stars, but there just aren’t enough of them to have much impact. Do you have any advice on how to get more reviews and therefore more sales?

Best wishes,

Reviewless


Dear Reviewless,

Getting reviews is hard, I know. For my last book, I wrote over 100 emails to book bloggers, sent out numerous review copies, and still only received a handful of reviews in return. It’s a little soul destroying, particularly when you’d rather be working on your next book instead of pumping out email after email with little return.

There are services that offer to help find reviewers for you, but be careful of these and do your due diligence before dropping any cash. It is against Amazon’s rules for you to pay for reviews and some of these services are pay-to-play and you may end up spending a lot of money for reviews that Amazon will remove right after they’re posted. This includes offering any kind of gift or incentive in exchange for reviews, even offering a review to another author in return.

Personally, I have used two different review-finding services, one of which was excellent value for money, the other, less expensive, but also less effective. Predictably, the next time I wanted to use the excellent service, they were booked up over a year in advance, so were not available at the time my book was being released.

There are also a number of free sites where you can offer your book for reviewers. I have had zero success with any of these, but they’re free, so even if they don’t generate any reviews, at least it’s not costing me anything other than the time to fill in the online form.

I have read that targeting the top Amazon reviewers who review similar books to your own is an effective way to generate reviews, but have not tried this myself. I had a look, but so few of the top reviewers had contact information available, it felt like something that would be more time consuming that it was worth. If anyone has tried this, I would be interested to know if it paid off…

Another thing I’ve heard about is adding a page at the end of your book urging readers to leave a review if they enjoyed the book. I’m not self-pubbed, so can’t do this, but if you are, this could be something that helps remind readers to leave a review.

You should also remind your fans to do so. If you have a mailing list (and you should), you will send out regular newsletters to people who have signed up because they already like your work. These people are your strongest allies and it’s important you use them effectively. Offering free review copies to these people is not effective because as your fans, they are likely to buy your new book anyway. But they are the people who will talk about your book and raise awareness of it. Use them to create advance buzz and be your street team in letting people know your book is coming, and that you’re looking for reviewers.

Keep track of who reviews your latest book so you can reach out to them again for your next one. Some reviewers state in their guidelines they are not open to reviewing unless they’ve worked with an author previously, so these relationships are important. So are the relationships you build with other writers. You can ask your beta readers and critique partners to review your book when it is finally published. You can ask your editor and copy editor. You can ask your cover designer.

Long story short, getting reviews is hard. It’s time consuming and there are really no short cuts. You just have to do the work, reach out to as many people as possible, and nurture the relationships you build this way.

If any of our blog readers have come across any great way to get more reviews, please post them in the comments.

Hope this is helpful, and good luck!

X O’Abby







Wednesday, August 7, 2019

Stephanie Jimenez's Debut Author Spotlight #NewBook #20Questions at Operation Awesome

Debut Author Spotlight from @JLenniDorner on @OpAwesome6

They Could Have Named Her Anything by Stephanie Jimenez


Today's spotlight shines a debut author who has already become a best-seller!


1- "Sleeping In" is my favorite song by The Postal Service. What's yours?

My favorite song by the Postal Service is Nothing Better and seeing Jenny Lewis perform it with Ben Gibbard this summer at the Forest Hills Stadium in Queens, New York was a real highlight of my life.

2- Would you please, in 160 characters or less, give a #WriteTip ?

Enjoy the writing because it’s the best part of the process. Don’t pay attention to trends. Have courage and keep your faith in your own voice.

3- What ignited your passion for writing?

I started writing as a teenager when I was unsure of basically everything except my passion for writing. I started a Blogspot with a friend from high school and we posted poems religiously. It was the first writing community I ever had. At fifteen and sixteen, I understood the value of writing in community.

4- What organizations might you suggest to those who want to help the humans being detained for allegedly committing a possible misdemeanor in the US?

I’m not sure I understand this question—however, as someone who works in the nonprofit world and actively donates, I can gladly direct readers to my favorite organizations. If you want to support organizations that are doing good work to reform prisons, consider donating to the ACLU or The Marshall Project. If you want to support organizations that are helping migrants at the border right now, consider donating to RAICES Texas, No More Deaths No Mas Muertes, and Immigrant Families Together. If you want to donate to support reproductive rights and justice, donate to (link: http://Rewire.News) Rewire.News, the National Latina Institute for Reproductive Health, the Doula Project.

5- What's your Twitter handle, and do you have two or three writer friends on there to shout-out to for #WriterWednesday ?

My twitter handle is @estefsays! And absolutely, would love to shout out Loan Le (@loanloan) and Sandra (@kumwongsandra)

6- Would you share a picture with us of your book in the city?




7- Do you have a tip or piece of advice to offer today's teenagers?

Don’t be afraid of asking for help. I know you got things under control but trust me—there are people out there who can bring you to even greater heights.

8- What most motivates you to read a new book?

I’m interested in the way women have been surviving and even excelling in the world. One moment, I’m reading about an early 19th century Mexican American woman botanist and explorer, and the next I’m devouring a nonfiction book about the young women in America who were coerced into giving up their children to adoption before the passage of Roe v. Wade. I love reading books that open me up to new worlds and perspectives. As an author of fiction, I have a peculiar and unexpected soft spot for memoir. Vivian Gornick’s memoir Fierce Attachments, Angela Morales’ The Girl in My Town, and a very big coffee book about the lives of pioneering women in the Midwest are some of the books that have captivated my imagination and inspire me to revisit my fiction with renewed energy.

9- What is your favorite book by someone else, what's the author's Twitter handle, and what do you love most about that book? #FridayReads book recommendation time!

Author name: @d_lazarin
Title: Back Talk
Love because: the stories are so painfully beautiful and real!


10- Who is currently your biggest fan? What does that person love most (or "ship") about your debut novel?

My biggest fan right now is Sarah Gonzalez. She just hosted one of my launch events at Mil Mundos Bookstore in Bushwick, Brooklyn. One of the things she told me at the event is that she was able to see herself in my book. That was a compliment I truly could have never anticipated when I first started writing They Could Have Named Her Anything. It’s an honor to hear that each and every time.


11- What emotions do you hope your book will evoke for the reader, and is there a particular scene you hope will resonate with readers?

If my book helps anyone become the slightest bit more empathetic to young women, and especially young women of color, I would consider that a big win.

12- Do you have a favorite #bookstagram image or account/ profile?

I love Lupita Reads. (@lupita.reads). Follow her for the best of the best book recommendations!

13- How do you hope your book will help readers in their life?

There are so many unexpected ways that a book can change not just your life, but the lives of people you love. Already, I’ve been approached by people who are buying the book for their brothers, sisters, nieces, and friends. If my book has the potential to heal, strengthen, or foster a relationship, that would be a gift.

14- What is the most memorable trait or visual oddity of one of your characters?

My character doesn’t have a visual oddity exactly, but she does have name that becomes one of the central anxieties of the book. Her name is Maria Rosario, and the way her relationship to her name evolves is a hint to how I chose the title of the novel.

15- In what ways are the main characters in your book diverse? diversebooks.org #WeNeedDiverseBooks

My novel’s protagonist is a seventeen-year-old Latina living in New York, and her family are comprised of Latin American immigrants of varying generations. Maria struggles to fit in at her elite and mostly-white private school, and one of the reasons she struggles so much is because she can’t conceptualize her identity outside of the few representations of Latinidad available to her. All she knows of Latinidad are worn stereotypes—ways of seeing herself that are imposed on her by other people. If there’s one reason why it’s so important to have more representations of people of color in books and the media, it’s because a multitude of representations will help us become who we most fully are. They allow us to visualize new possibilities for ourselves and each other. They provide a new way of imagining our place in the world.

16- Who is your favorite book review blogger?

The Debutante Ball, a blog that I am part of, is a fantastic blog devoted to promoting debut authors. Every week, the blog hosts a guest interview in which we get to hype up another author we admire. And during the rest of the week, we post writing tips and advice!

17- What was the deciding factor in your publication route?

I published with Amazon Publishing’s literary fiction imprint Little A. I actually hadn’t known that Amazon published books until my agent first started sending out my novel to editors. When I found my editor, I knew immediately that she was the right person for the project. That first edit call, only a few weeks after we first sent her the manuscript, solidified my belief that she fully understood the vision of the book. And on top of that, Amazon provides some incredible marketing opportunities. Because of their First Reads program, my book has been promoted to so many more readers than it would have if I had gone a more conventional publishing route.

18- Why do you think readers should write book reviews?

I think leaving reviews is the best way to do other readers a favor. Our internet culture too often seems to feeds off negativity. Writing a review for a book you enjoyed is like the literary equivalent of planting a tree. You are doing something good not just for the author but for the world—for other readers who might now also discover the book and love it as much you do.

19- Do you have one question or discussion topic which you would like the readers of this interview to answer or remark on in the comments?

My book is very much about names, about who has the power to name, and the way we love or reject our names, both our birthnames and the ones given to us later. I would love readers to tell me the following: Do you love your name? Have you ever been ashamed of it? Tell me the story of your name.

As a Lenni-Lenape, the Name Giver gave me my true name, but it was much later in my life. I picked J because (long story) a form had to be filled out. I didn't know it is traditionally spelled with a superfluous "ay" tacked on. And then added Lenni as a middle name, because I thought the question was about my tribe, and people almost never say Lenape correctly. I'd love to learn more about names, too! Especially how some people look at a name and know things about the person. Where or how is that skill learned, and how accurate is it?

20- Anything else you would care to share about your book and yourself?

Stephanie Jimenez is the author of They Could Have Named Her Anything. She is a former Fulbright recipient currently based in Queens, New York. Her fiction and non-fiction have appeared in the Guardian, O! the Oprah Magazine, Joyland Magazine, The New York Times, and more. Her debut novel THEY COULD HAVE NAMED HER ANYTHING came out in August 2019 from Little A Books. You can find her at (link: http://www.stephaniejimenezwriter.com) stephaniejimenezwriter.com or follow her on @estefsays Twitter and Instagram at @estefsays.

They Could Have Named Her Anything by Stephanie Jimenez

Tuesday, August 6, 2019

Camp NaNoWriMo, Procrastinator's Edition!

How did everyone’s Camp NaNoWriMo go? Personally, I forgot about it entirely, although what with moving halfway around the world, I probably wouldn’t have had time for it anyway.

Image result for camp nanowrimo

So…I’m doing Camp NaNoWriMo this month! My goal is to prepare for this year’s November NaNoWriMo by writing a page of brainstorming ideas every day for my YA historical fantasy I’m calling Project Julie. So far, I’ve got five pages of ideas. For the most part, it’s just “what if X” and “I like the idea of Y” because the general idea for Project Julie is so new. Keeping the manuscript on a low simmer on a back burner in my mind has been really helpful, and I keep coming up with little ideas here and there. Hopefully by the end of the month, I’ll have enough started to get me going in November!

Did this slip anyone else’s mind? If you were on the ball and got some work done last month, how did it go? Tell me about it in the comments!

Monday, August 5, 2019

What are you reading that's new for you?

Thank you to everyone who participated in our poll and suggested genres for our next Pass or Pages.  You are all awesome!

While we consider the results and decide the next genre [genre reveal August 27!], let's pause for a mid-summer break.
Or mid-winter for our down-under readers.
Tasmania

What book are you reading right now?  I'm reading something that's entirely new for me - a humor book called FOOD:  A LOVE STORY by Jim Gaffigan.  I'm reading on audio, read by the author!  Admittedly, I wouldn't call his voice riveting, but he has a way of delivering jokes deadpan, which makes it extra funny.  I'm about two hours in, and three times I've almost had to stop the car because I was laughing so much I thought I might crash.

What have you read recently that's new for you?  Tell us in the comments!


Thursday, August 1, 2019

Dear O'Abby: Do I Need to Pay a Beta Reader?

Dear O'Abby,

I've recently finished revising a novel based on feedback from a critique group and feel like I'm ready now to get another layer of feedback.  I've been looking for beta readers to get this, and was surprised when one of the people I reached out to asked to be paid for it.  Is this normal?  Should I expect to pay for a beta read?

Yours,

Strapped

Dear Strapped,

No. This is not normal.  Beta readers are usually fellow writers or people who like reading in your category and can articulate what they think the problems are with your book.  In my experience, beta reading is usually a reciprocal thing - I'll read your MS if you read mine - but it doesn't have to be.

Certainly, it's a nice gesture if you give a copy of the finished book to the person who beta read for you, and you can thank them in the acknowledgments section of the book. But I don't believe you should pay actual cash money.

That said, if you are wanting a significant amount of feedback, and perhaps some line editing as well, then there might be a case for paying someone to read your MS.  But in that case, I think the line between beta reading and editorial work is somewhat blurred.  You would definitely expect to pay an editor and often the differences between what a beta reader and an editor do are quite small.  I certainly do little line edits in manuscripts I beta read just because I can't help myself if I see a spelling, grammar or other minor error.

But I don't ask to be paid for the beta reading I do just because I will mention if you have a comma in the wrong place as well as telling you the MC needs to be more active in solving their own problems, or a secondary character is just annoying, not endearing, or that I feel like the whole of chapter 23 is completely redundant and slows the pacing.  I just hope that when my next MS is ready to be seen, you will do the same for me.

Hope that's helpful!  And good luck with your manuscript.

X O'Abby


Wednesday, July 31, 2019

Kaytalin Platt's Debut Author Spotlight #NewBook #20Questions at Operation Awesome

Debut Author Spotlight from @JLenniDorner on @OpAwesome6

The Living God by Kaytalin Platt


1- Given your skills in cover art, did you make your own cover?

In this case, I did not make my own cover. It was designed by the very talented Tim Barber of Dissect Designs. Though, I did make an initial cover for The Living God, (and there may be remnants of it floating around on the interwebs) Inkshares, my publisher, had a better plan. I actually found it much harder to design a cover for my own work compared designing one for a stranger.

2- Would you please, in 160 characters or less, give a #WriteTip ?

Focus on progress, not perfection. Don’t get trapped in an editing loop, keep building your story. You can’t edit a blank page, so don’t stop writing.

3- What ignited your passion for writing?

A small town, a shortage of books that interested me, and my mother. I grew up in a town of 450 people, and I burned through all the available science fiction and fantasy that intrigued me in our school library. We lived almost an hour from a bookstore, so I didn’t buy new books often. I’m still very thankful that the Scholastic Book Fair exists and travels to small, rural schools. My mother was a painter and dabbled in writing. She also let me listen to her music, which was mostly instrumental, and she challenged me to write what I imagined was happening while a certain song played.

4- Your resolution on your blog was to give up "self-doubt, laziness, and impatience" this year. How's it going?

For the most part, laziness and impatience have been relatively easy to give up. I still find impatience creeping in at certain times, mostly when I need to be somewhere or do something quickly. However, I think, as a creative, self-doubt will always be my personal boogeyman. It is a complex issue that, for me, hinges heavily on imposter syndrome. I oscillate from being extremely excited about my successes to mind-numbing terror that I don’t deserve them. When I approach an opportunity or a project and I am overcome with concern that I can’t do it or will fail, I push through those feelings and attempt it anyway. I’ve always believed that we are each capable of wonderful things, if only we try. Even failing is better than never having tried at all. Overcoming self-doubt will be a never-ending battle, I’m sure. But, I’m stubborn and welcome the fight.

5- What's your Twitter handle, and do you have two or three writer friends on there to shout-out to for #WriterWednesday ?

My Twitter handle is @KaytalinPlatt. I have so many writer friends on Twitter I would love to shout out too. Seriously, the #writingcommunity on Twitter is absolutely amazing. But, if I had to pick two, it would be Liz Kerin @liz_kerin (The Phantom Forest) and Jaye Milius @jayemilius (Terminus). Both have offered me wonderful advice and encouragement and both have books releasing soon! Go check them out.

6- My fellow Pennsylvanian, would you share a picture with us of you book somewhere iconic in Philadelphia?

In front of Independence Hall.


7- What prompted you to start a Patreon?

Accountability and a desire to share stories in a new way! I have so many projects I want to work on at any given time, aside from The Living God and the follow ups to it. I’m often overcome be a sense of dread that I am running out of time or that I’ll never get to share all those different stories with others. The Patreon has two roles. First, it will act as a cattle prod to keep me focused on this project–I will have a commitment to fulfill for the patrons and an overactive conscience that will ensure I don’t break that commitment. Second, it will (eventually and hopefully) help fund the self-publishing work that will need to be done–professional editing primarily.

8- What most motivates you to read a new book?

Like most people, I’m drawn to books with strong female characters and unique premises. However, as a graphic designer, I’m also drawn to cover imagery and more often than not will pick up a book because of that. Also, I’ve been so busy lately, that my to-be-read list has grown thanks to the suggestion of friends.

9- What is your favorite book by someone else, what's the author's Twitter handle, and what do you love most about that book? #FridayReads book recommendation time!

One of my favorite authors is Robin McKinley, and my favorite book is the Hero and the Crown. A princess who desires to become a dragon slayer? What isn’t to love? But, I’m unsure if Robin McKinley has a Twitter handle (I could only find an unverified account), and I’d really like to recommend an indie author!
Author name: @acwestonwrites
Title: She Is the End
Love because: I liked the movie Jupiter Ascending but something nagged at me and left me wanting more. She Is the End was everything that I wanted in Jupiter Ascending from an emotional and depth perspective. It was an entertaining, well paced read that made me care very deeply for the characters and I’m itching for the next installment.


10- Who is currently your biggest fan? What does that person love most (or "ship") about your debut novel?

Aside from my mother-in-law, my biggest fan would have to be my best friend Kathy. She has been on this crazy writing journey of mine since I was in the 10th grade. She became my fan with a little story I posted on FictionPress.com called “The Necklace,” and I’m pretty sure she would like me to revive it one day. We became long distant writing buddies (1,800 miles apart). Kathy has read almost everything I’ve ever written, encouraged and pushed me. I probably would have given up a long time ago if not for her. I write for me, but I love writing for her, too.
She’s also a sucker for a tortured character (honestly, who isn’t?), so she loves Keleir and the potentially doomed romance he has with Saran.

11- What emotions do you hope your book will evoke for the reader, and is there a particular scene you hope will resonate with readers?

I hope it evokes a range of emotions, as the emotional journey of the characters is really the heart of the story. There is action, but the emotional journey is what the story is about. It is complex, deep, and sometimes confusing–as most human emotions are. There is never one feeling, but a range of feelings at any given moment.
At a point in the story, where Keleir is hopeless and convinced that he is doomed–that no one believes in him or trusts trust him–he has all but given up on fighting the creature in him. Saran sets him straight by making a vow to rid Keleir of the beast and insists she trusts him. The emotion that radiates in that scene still makes me cry when I read it, and I’ve read it over and over in the editing process. If any scene in the book touches someone, I hope it is that one. I think we all understand hopelessness, alienation, or desertion, and what it means to us to have someone come in and remind us we are loved, trusted, and believed in.

12- Do you have a favorite #bookstagram image or account/ profile?

https://www.instagram.com/some.place.new/
I love Some.Place.New’s #bookstagram. Those images make me want to go out and buy all the books and I love that she has found her creative visual voice. Just beautiful.

13- How do you hope your book will help readers in their life?

Sometimes life feels hopeless, sometimes we are faced with situations outside of our control, and sometimes we are bombarded by a hundred different problems at once. I hope my book inspires someone to carry on despite the heavy burden they bear. At the heart of this story, the true message is that some things in life are unavoidable and we simply have to keep going and work through it. Even if it isn’t the path we chose, even if it isn’t a life we wanted, just keep moving forward. Keep going. Sometimes the only way out is through.

14- What is the most memorable trait or visual oddity of one of your characters?

Keleir was born with stark white hair and blood red eyes. Those traits define him as a monster in his world. In our world, he just looks like an anime cosplayer, so he gets his photo taken a lot. He doesn’t mind.

15- diversebooks.org #WeNeedDiverseBooks What's your favorite book with a diverse main character?

My favorite book with a diverse main character would have to be Tahani Nelson’s The Last Faoii and her MC Kaiya. Seriously, that book is fantastic. Rich world-building and a strong female character (who happens to be black and gay). Who she is and her strengths are the central focus of the story, not her race or her sexual orientation.


16- How are you dealing with the heat this summer?

I love being outdoors in the summer, which doesn't make a lot of time for writing. Since there have been many days considered "dangerously hot", especially for an asthmatic like myself, it's created a great opportunity (or excuse) to stay indoors and devote time to reading and writing. I've made more progress than I thought possible on the sequel to The Living God, though I do wish it was cool enough to garden more.

17- What was the deciding factor in your publication route?

I went with Inkshares because their publication model was intriguing. It mixed crowdfunding with traditional publishing. I knew that my story was kind of crazy-pants. It is genre-bending, complicated, and not usually what a publisher or agent would be interested in taking a chance on. It is kind of experimental. In many ways, that experimental nature is subtle in the first book, but the entire series is high fantasy meets Sliders (The TV show. From the 90’s? Anyone remember that one? No... Just me? Okay.) It will be a four part series following world-hopping elemental mages who race to save multiple universes from total obliteration. Like I said, crazy-pants. So I took a chance on a system that, if you garner enough reader interest and pre-orders, leads to publication. By some miracle of the Universe... here we are.

18- Why do you think readers should write book reviews?

I think it helps other readers know if a book is a good fit for them. I also think the review process for each reader is very personal. Once this book is in your hands, it is ultimately your story too. It will inspire entirely different emotions in you than it did in me, or your friends, or your mom... No two people will have the same feelings about a book. Just like how I am one of two people who love the movie Waterworld.

Also, this is my first time being an author at the end of a book review from a stranger. I’ve been told by a few authors that I shouldn’t read the reviews, but I did in the first few weeks. Initially, there was this visceral gut-punch realization that it is out there in the world and real people are reading it and I can’t pull it back if there are things about it they don’t like. Its over, done, and free for everyone to form opinions about. Imagine spending years of your life working on this one creative project, building characters, molding their story and lives–basically living in that place with them–and then turning it over to the world without the ability to alter or change it anymore. It is utterly terrifying. I’ve learned a lot based off the reviews so far. Nothing will ever be perfect, but the few reviews I have read tell me what I’m doing really well and what I will work on in the next book.

19- What is one question or discussion topic which you would like the readers of this interview to answer or remark on in the comments?

Oof! This is a question that took me some pondering. Lately, I’ve adopted #BeTheBiggestFan as my new motto. I want to support other creatives. I want to be their biggest fan. I think I’d love a discussion on ways we can support creatives, whether that be writers or artists of any medium. Reviews are one of the most important steps to supporting writers. What else can we do? How can we be the biggest fan?

20- Anything else you would care to share about your book and yourself?

I’m just a woman from a little town called Deer Park, Alabama, who fell in love with the North East and, on a whim, moved thousands of miles from home. I share my home with my supportive husband and our adorable rescue doggo, Mr. Bones. You can follow Mr. Bones on Instagram (https://www.instagram.com/bones_the_wonder_dog/). I’m sadly better at keeping up his Instagram page than my own, but feel free to follow me too (https://www.instagram.com/kaytalinplatt).

Also, follow me on Twitter!(@KaytalinPlatt) I’ll try to follow back! I love discussions about writing, art, Star Wars... and of course supporting other creatives!

If you’re into dark fantasy stories, angels and demons, and life after death, check out my Patreon (https://www.patreon.com/kaytalinplatt)!

Thank you so much for reading this. It means the world to me.



Debut Author Spotlight from @JLenniDorner on @OpAwesome6

The Living God by Kaytalin Platt

Tuesday, July 30, 2019

What living abroad taught me about writing fantasy

For the past year, I’ve been living in the city of Mechelen in Belgium. It’s this gorgeous historical town halfway between Brussels and Antwerp, and I highly recommend visiting it if you’re planning a trip to Europe. It’s big enough that most people speak English, but small enough that it’s not “modernized” like a lot of major European cities I’ve visited. While the actual experience of living abroad wasn’t always amazing, my writer-brain was constantly active, soaking up the local culture and trying to relate it to writing fantasy. I mean, it was hard not to think about how much I love world-building while standing on the Grote Markt and staring up at a 700-year-old cathedral, listening to the carillonist playing songs so old nobody knows the lyrics anymore. I did find some things that I thought were relevant and helpful, so I hope y’all can learn a little something from what I figured out while I was there.

Languages

I know, I know, I’m constantly writing about languages and dialects, but they’re SO COOL. In Belgium, there are three main languages spoken – French, Flemish, and German – and a lot of people speak English as well, although it’s not an official language. That’s a lot of languages for a country that’s barely bigger than Maryland! Not to mention the fact that every city has its own dialect, and dialects are sometimes so different from “standard” Flemish that they’re completely unintelligible.

What this showed me is that, if I’m going to be writing a fantasy world that is Belgium-sized or bigger, there would probably be more than one language spoken. A lot of fantasy books I’ve read feature a variety of languages, often based on race (like Entish and Sindarin in Tolkien’s universe), and I do sometimes see languages based on geographical region. In these books, there’s usually a standardized language – I seem to remember several series calling it Common – and I always thought that was weird, but I now know that this makes sense. So I’d recommend taking that into consideration, especially if a character is a trader, nobleperson, or artisan.

Market Days

Market day was my favorite day of the week. Every Satuday – not just in Mechelen, I’ve also been to markets in Gouda, Dordrecht, Lier, and Haarlem – the entire city turns out to visit the market. The variety of vendors is incredible. Pretty much everyone turns out to go to the market. It’s not just for shopping, but also socializing. In Mechelen, there are stalls that sell mussels, with tall tables where people can stand around and drink and socialize. There are snack stands – things like pancakes and waffles – and vendors selling everything from raw meat and fish to live pet birds. People sell clothes, cheese, bread, vegetables, flowers, and plenty of other items. The city carillonneur (I’d explain but that would take way too long) plays the cathedral bells during market day as well, playing everything from pop music to songs from 500 years ago.

What I took away from this is that the market day is the central day of the week. People go to socialize, shop, observe other people, and get news. And speaking of which…

News

There’s this story about Mechelen where in the late 1600s, a drunk stumbled out of a bar in the wee hours and thought the cathedral was on fire. He roused the entire city, a bucket brigade was formed, and when they got to the top of the tower, they realized that the “fire” was just a red moon shining through a cloud, illuminating the cathedral tower from behind. This story spread across Flanders like actual fire, and before long, Mechelinians were being called “maneblussers,” or “moon extinguishers.” Most cities in Flanders have similar, slightly mocking names for the inhabitants of particular cities.

Anyway. My point is that news travelled fast, and led to some pretty funny nicknames. When writing fantasy, consider the spread of news and information. It might be faster than you think!

I hope you've learned something from all this. I mean, I moved across the ocean just to find this stuff out for you, so...ya know, I hope it was worth it!

Monday, July 29, 2019

LAST CALL for YOUR input for our next Pass Or Pages!

In case y'all were on vacation last week, we posted four YA Horror entries with agent comments [YAY to all of you who participated!].

Here's what we've done so far for Pass Or Pages:

January 2016 – Adult mystery & thriller
March 2016 – YA contemporary
May 2016 – MG speculative
July 2016 – Women's fiction
September 2016 – YA speculative
November 2016 – MG contemporary
March 2017 – Adult sci-fi/fantasy
May 2017 – YA contemporary
July 2017 – Contemporary romance
September 2017 – MG sci-fi/fantasy
March 2018 – YA sci-fi/fantasy
July 2018 – YA contemporary
September 2018 – Diverse YA fairy tales, folktales, & myths
May 2019 – Adult historical fiction
July 2019 – YA horror

Last Friday, we posted and also tweeted a request for you 
Yes YOU
to suggest genres and age ranges for our next Pass Or Pages event.  Here's what we have as of the date I'm drafting this post, from the comments last Friday and as responses to our tweets:

MG fantasy – 2 votes
MG humor – 1 vote
YA mystery – 2 votes
YA mystery or sci-fi – 1 vote
YA thriller – 1 vote
YA fantasy – 1 vote
YA political contemporary – 1 vote
Adult fantasy – 2 votes
Adult urban fantasy – 1 vote
Adult thriller – 2 votes
Adult general/contemporary fiction – 1 vote

This makes 15 people who are engaged and participating.  Thank you!
I'm sure there are several others of you out there who have an opinion.  We want to know what it is!  Please leave a comment on THIS post, or respond to one of our tweets, RIGHT NOW BEFORE YOU FORGET OR GET DISTRACTED.  What genre and age range do YOU want to see for the next Pass Or Pages?

Thank you!


Friday, July 26, 2019

We want YOUR input for the next Pass or Pages!


The Operation Awesome team has chosen the genre for the past several Pass or Pages events. Now, we want to hear your suggestions! What genre and age range would you like to see us host next? Leave a comment here or respond to one of our tweets!

Thursday, July 25, 2019

July 2019 Pass or Pages Entry #4


Time for the Pass Or Pages feedback reveals! We're so thankful to our agent panel for taking the time to critique these entries. Shout out to the brave authors whose work will be on the blog this week. You are awesome!

Entry #4: LONG STORIES SHORT

Query:

“Long Stories Short” [CR1] - one story pieced together chapter by chapter through short stories shared from the point of view of a handful of key characters. These characters’ unique voices shows how everyone’s perspective is valuable; everyone’s story matters [KP1].

The novel is comprised of roughly 70,800 words. Each chapter is in short story format, from a different character’s perspective. Their stories reveal that all events in their life have a purpose if they listen and watch for signs around them [KP2] [CR2].

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Kelly's Notes:
[KP1] What is the collective meaning or purpose of this collection though? What do they all have in common? Why is this important and relevant in today’s world? Who are the main characters? Why should any readers care?
[KP2] Query is not really grabbing me, because I’m not sure what your over-arching story is actually about. You need to explain what the purpose and importance of this story is and why you wrote it in short stories to begin with. What’s the story about? Who’s telling the story or a part of the story? What are the stakes?

Cortney's Notes:
[CR1] Title should be all caps.
[CR2] This query tells me nothing about what the actual book is about. What’s the overarching story? Wants of the characters? Conflict? Tension? I don’t have any idea what I’m going to see in the pages, which is an immediate red flag for me. If I don’t like the first paragraph or so, then there’s nothing else for me to hold onto or be interested in, because the query didn’t give me anything.



First 250 words:


Mom is on the left, Jess is on the right.  Once again, I’m stuck sitting on the couch during another one of their fights [KP1].

“Why don’t you ever listen to me?!” Mom yells.

“Why do you treat me like a child?!” my sister screams back.

Turning my head from side to side like I’m waiting to cross the street, I’m surprised I don’t have a crick in my neck. I feel like I’m playing monkey in the middle, which includes that same sick feeling in the pit of my stomach. Flashbacks of pig-tailed little me, jumping up and down, praying that someone on the outside would take pity on me. That game wasn’t fun even when I was a kid.

“We can’t live like this, Jessica!” Mom continues.

“No one could live with a tyrant like you!” Jess screeches [KP2].

To many people, a battle between hot-headed redheads might be stereotypically humorous. For me, this argument is just another notch in the belt of fights between my sister and mom. Sometimes I wonder if they even hear what the other is saying when both raise their voices to see who can be the loudest.

“You’re just counting the days until you leave for college!” Mom runs her hands through her hair – a nervous tick during fights. It almost looks as if she’s massaging her head for comfort [KP3] [CR1].

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Kelly's Notes: 
[KP1] This sentence is a slightly bland statement. In order to really reel in your audience, I think you can find something a bit more purposeful and powerful they can relate to while sitting in the middle of a fight between family.
[KP2] Looking at dialogue tags, your use of them is rather repetitive which is slightly endearing in this usage, but it can also get old very quickly and actually pull you away from your readers due to a lack of fluency and natural voice.
[KP3] I’m not exactly sure what the main character wants or who she is yet, and due to your query being not quite ready, I’m going to unfortunately pass


Cortney's Notes: 
[CR1] Not the right place to start. Too much is going on and since I know none of the characters, this fight falls extremely flat. It doesn’t mean anything to me right now. And since the query didn’t tell me anything about the story, I have no idea where this is headed and don’t have anything else to hold my interest and keep me moving forward.


Results:


Kelly: PASS
Cortney: PASS